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For A Little While |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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You loved me for a little while Alot of times you made me smile My love for you was so strong Together I thought we did belong Then you started turning me away And you would stay gone all day I gave you all the love I had But you acted like I was bad Still I kept on trying to love you Hoping that you would love me too But nothing I do is ever good enough Maybe I wasn't meant to be loved © By Sue 12-28-01 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* My heart goes out to you....I know this feeling so very well. Never let anyone make you feel you are not loveable. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, this is so sad, I know deep down with all my heart that there is a true love for you out there, and you will find it and he will always be happy of what you'll share with him! (kiss on cheek) My heart goes to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
You are meant to be loved! And don't you doubt it for a second.. The poem you wrote, flows great and the saddness you express is easily comprhened. great poem, and just another step in you life. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
yeah, you weren't meant to be loved.....by a loser. Someone will appreciate your willingness to give all in the pursuit of love. It will happen....  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, the things we do to please, Don't exactly come with ease. But when the wrong man you adore, Creates much pain and even more. When finally you have figured out, This man you love is just a lout; 'Tis time to realize the truth, Before you sacrifice your youth. For when things are really meant to be, True love will be so plain to see. So kick that bad boy to the curb, Don't think you won't be loved...how absurd! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A beautiful heart will find true love...If only you let it come to you.... This poem carries lots and lots of feelings.. I hope you find a man that will return love as much as you give... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
He doesn't deserve you, find someone who does. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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