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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-29 10:58 AM


RING

Ring
Ring
A New Year comes
with Hope that life and Love
will come to us all when we start
the year with prayer and thanksgiving
As we bring in this New Year now with joy
and laughter, let's all shout and sing aloud
as we all share around the world the time
we join together to bring in the New year
Let many hearts reach out in love to all
mankind who share life upon this planet
blessed by God and left unto our keeping
Open your mouths with vioces loud proclaim
that we will give of our hearts and share love this
year as we all move forward starting a fresh new year
The bells ring out and call to you to share with us the gift
with words that flow from the depths of your heart and soul
while you paint magical pictures that fill us with sweet joy
ring
ring

Karen TorbiakĀ©
2001


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2001-12-29 11:08 AM


Oh this is so wonderful Karen. I tried to do that once and I found it difficult, to concentrate on the poem and also the form.. I just love this.. Wouldn't this look great in a greeting card? love it so much, strbbux
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2 posted 2001-12-29 01:00 PM


Wow, that is awesome, Karen!  Very creative!  I loved the message... and I'm blessing you with a HAPPY NEW YEAR as well
Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-29 01:26 PM


Hi!!! Startime...It's so good to read your work,again. Have I missed you. Wonderful New Year's poem written in your skillfull hand and from your generous heart  *****Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-29 01:31 PM


Karen, I hope this year turns out to be a happy one for us all. There is so much to get over from 2001.
Perfect poem.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-12-29 01:34 PM




YAY!!! May we all ring in the New Year with cheer and joy! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you ring the bell in your words with pure love! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-12-29 02:30 PM


This is so beautiful, Star. I love reading your poems.
Tracey
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7 posted 2001-12-29 03:13 PM


Wow Karen, how cool is this? Great poem, great form. I hope the new year brings great joy and happiness for you and your family

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2001-12-29 03:40 PM


Karen,what a beautiful poem.May you have a safe and wonderful New Year!





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Magnus
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9 posted 2001-12-29 06:15 PM


Karen...You are the professional at this..
I must simply say that with a bowed head
while on my Knees....And I wish you and
Erin a beautiful, prosperous and happy New
Year...

From all of us T's in the state of S.C....

Tim, Ash, Barry and Lou....

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