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craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

0 posted 2001-12-29 09:56 AM

Among strangers
she would steal a stare,
speak of Egypt and China
in no uncertain terms,
of social mores,
decadence, moralities
old and new.

Alone, as the sex
matured between us,
her eyes caressed like lips,
she rose, explaining that
a bit of honey dew would
prolong the moment,
sweeten the scent,
wet the dust to be
mingled with mine forever.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-29 10:02 AM

a bit of honey dew would
prolong the moment,
sweeten the scent,
wet the dust to be
mingled with mine forever.
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*whew* very very cool poem of imagery and inspire from desire.
well done poet sir.
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2001-12-29 11:04 AM

Sweet words, nice read...strbbux

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-29 11:07 AM

*sigh* a sensual delight to read. Welcome to Passions. I can see I am going to enjoy reading the work that flows from your pen. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-29 02:41 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Craig, your lovely words light these pages with sensual and romantic love! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is a true keeper! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2001-12-29 03:32 PM

The most thought provoking part of this is that you have painted people who are one in both the day and the night. I like that.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2001-12-29 04:55 PM

craigrk,
Wow! Someone's been journeying...and it shows. Beautiful!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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