To My Sweetheart... (Poet DeVine's Challenge)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-28 06:31 PM

Dear Sweetheart...
By: Noah Eaton
12/28/01

Dear Joanna...

Every time I go to sleep
Every moment I suddenly weep
You are always in my thoughts, my love
Cooing to me like a lovestruck dove

There are all these intimate secrets I've longed to share
Sonatas and sestinas I've yearned to weave for you to wear
I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart
With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars

Yet before I fall asleep each and every evening
I can feel your lips caressing mine and kissing
And how I'd give anything to make my dreas come true
To hold you close and love you

I consider this a true blessing
To feel your love from so far away in glee
To feel your whispers through the whirlwind
Carrying my heart to the towers of heaven

Your love is in every heartbeat I suspire
You are all my heart desires
I dream of sailing away with you into enchantment
Sharing each kiss with you against every sunset passionate

So from my lips I blow you this kiss of ecstacy
To show you how much I love you so, sweet darling
Holding onto this hope we will meet someday in matrimony dance
Sharing a happy love of heavenly romance...

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-28-2001 06:32 PM).]

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

1 posted 2001-12-28 06:36 PM

Oh Noah: If she doesn't want you, call me. This is super. I love it and your very emotional thoughts and words. Nicely done.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-12-28 07:14 PM

Such a tender loving letter. Save this Noah and give it to her on beautiful stationary, along with one red rose....she'll swoon!!!

Into my library!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2001-12-28 07:21 PM

yes, Noah, make sure you send this to her, in your handwriting, for her to keep forever

*sigh* it's lovely

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

4 posted 2001-12-28 07:30 PM

Sea is right this is one that will be tucked away with a few of lifes most treasured moments, but carries in her heart forever. The only way you could miss with this one Noah is if you were going for subtle. This is a heart holder *S*

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

5 posted 2001-12-28 08:39 PM

Sooooo romatically beautiful.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-28 08:54 PM

Hi honey! How could I not swoon over this? It is so romantic...so perfect! You must give me a written copy to frame!
I love this but my fav lines were
"I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart
With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars"
Thank You Sweetness!

Joanna

rosepetals25

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PA

7 posted 2001-12-28 10:15 PM

Noah,

What a beautiful poem. Your romantic words never cease to amaze me. You have such a beautiful heart

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2001-12-28 11:01 PM

what a lucky girl to have such a loving man..beautifully done Noah..

~Victoria~

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Pablo Picasso

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-28 11:16 PM

*sigh* so tender and filled with love. This is magnificent writing, Noah...she is a lucky lady. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

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Michigan

10 posted 2001-12-29 12:22 PM

A romantic poem for a lucky lady, Noah.
Beautifully written.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2001-12-29 06:52 AM

Beautiful Noah,just like your heart.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

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Land of Never-ending Summers

12 posted 2001-12-29 08:02 AM

There are all these intimate secrets I've longed to share
Sonatas and sestinas I've yearned to weave for you to wear
I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart
With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars
===================

I especially love that part, coz true love IS about sharing deep dark secrets, isn't it? And to be the 'bookmark' of your love's heart. That's juz so sweet!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Fading Away

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13 posted 2001-12-29 12:49 PM

"I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart
With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars"

I loved that part of this poem. Such beautiful and intimacy you express here, Noah. There is lots of love behind these words, and your feelings for this girl are evident, without a doubt. *hugs* Beautiful work!

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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14 posted 2001-12-29 01:11 PM

Noah...Hi!!! It's Ivy Rose!!!! Just letting you know this is a lovely, lovely poem to your sweetheart. Wonderful, passionate writing...as usual.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2001-12-29 02:05 PM

So beautiful, Noah. You always have so much love to share.
Sandra

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

16 posted 2001-12-29 02:07 PM

What a romantic heart you have Noah. This is as lovely as all your poetry.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

17 posted 2001-12-29 02:25 PM

Goodness, call me,too

As Ariana stated

What a tremendous write, My Friend, and beyond beautiful! You have such a way with words. You write what I can only dream about my friend. Loved this.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

18 posted 2001-12-29 03:09 PM

*wow* your sweetheart is really lucky to have you, and especially when you pour your love right from your heart. Pure and full of warmth.

((hugs))
Charisma

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

19 posted 2001-12-29 04:10 PM

So very romantic! Your sweetheart will love this.

Deb

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