Open Poetry #17 |
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To My Sweetheart... (Poet DeVine's Challenge) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dear Sweetheart... By: Noah Eaton 12/28/01 Dear Joanna... Every time I go to sleep Every moment I suddenly weep You are always in my thoughts, my love Cooing to me like a lovestruck dove There are all these intimate secrets I've longed to share Sonatas and sestinas I've yearned to weave for you to wear I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars Yet before I fall asleep each and every evening I can feel your lips caressing mine and kissing And how I'd give anything to make my dreas come true To hold you close and love you I consider this a true blessing To feel your love from so far away in glee To feel your whispers through the whirlwind Carrying my heart to the towers of heaven Your love is in every heartbeat I suspire You are all my heart desires I dream of sailing away with you into enchantment Sharing each kiss with you against every sunset passionate So from my lips I blow you this kiss of ecstacy To show you how much I love you so, sweet darling Holding onto this hope we will meet someday in matrimony dance Sharing a happy love of heavenly romance... Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-28-2001 06:32 PM).] |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Oh Noah: If she doesn't want you, call me. This is super. I love it and your very emotional thoughts and words. Nicely done. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such a tender loving letter. Save this Noah and give it to her on beautiful stationary, along with one red rose....she'll swoon!!! Into my library! ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, Noah, make sure you send this to her, in your handwriting, for her to keep forever ![]() ![]() |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Sea is right this is one that will be tucked away with a few of lifes most treasured moments, but carries in her heart forever. The only way you could miss with this one Noah is if you were going for subtle. This is a heart holder *S* Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sooooo romatically beautiful. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi honey! How could I not swoon over this? It is so romantic...so perfect! You must give me a written copy to frame! I love this but my fav lines were "I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars" Thank You Sweetness! Joanna |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, What a beautiful poem. Your romantic words never cease to amaze me. You have such a beautiful heart ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what a lucky girl to have such a loving man..beautifully done Noah.. ![]() ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so tender and filled with love. This is magnificent writing, Noah...she is a lucky lady. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A romantic poem for a lucky lady, Noah. Beautifully written. ![]() ![]() ![]() copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful Noah,just like your heart. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
There are all these intimate secrets I've longed to share Sonatas and sestinas I've yearned to weave for you to wear I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars =================== I especially love that part, coz true love IS about sharing deep dark secrets, isn't it? And to be the 'bookmark' of your love's heart. That's juz so sweet!! ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"I want to be there to bookmark the diary of your heart With roses and forget-me-nots and the dust of the stars" I loved that part of this poem. Such beautiful and intimacy you express here, Noah. There is lots of love behind these words, and your feelings for this girl are evident, without a doubt. *hugs* Beautiful work! --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...Hi!!! It's Ivy Rose!!!! Just letting you know this is a lovely, lovely poem to your sweetheart. Wonderful, passionate writing...as usual. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, Noah. You always have so much love to share. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a romantic heart you have Noah. This is as lovely as all your poetry. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, call me,too ![]() ![]() Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* your sweetheart is really lucky to have you, and especially when you pour your love right from your heart. Pure and full of warmth. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
So very romantic! Your sweetheart will love this. Deb |
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