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Passionate Love |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I love to go sit in my secret place A garden filled with many flowers Relaxing with my thoughts of you Embracng me with love for hours There I can find all the passion You gave to me when we first met Feelings of love I felt from you A special time I'll never forget Kissing me gently on my neck Pssionate love I'd feel from you While embracing me in your arms I felt your love through and through Yes I love to sit in my secret place Remembering love I felt from you Feelings of love I still do have And my love for you is still true © By Sue 12-29-01 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kissing me gently on my neck Pssionate love I'd feel from you While embracing me in your arms I felt your love through and through Yes I love to sit in my secret place Remembering love I felt from you Feelings of love I still do have And my love for you is still true ====================================== what a sweet sincere poem...cadenced kissed too a lovely bouquet from your secret garden. well done poetess Chick  good to see you posting again. Happy New Year. jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sue Very nicely done. Love is a wonderful thing and the feelings you have are the best. Happy New Year. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your heart glows with the magic of pure love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may the passion of ntrue love forever kindle in your heart! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I know just such a place. This is so beautiful that I could feel the love flowing from it. Passionate love it truly is. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sue, how wonderful....you let us see your special place, what a beautiful garden  thank you for sharing this with us |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
How beautiful. This was another trip down memory-lane. Love is a wonderful thing, eh? Thanks for sharing this. It's a wonderful piece. --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice memories..and if it is still happening, you are sure lucky! Lovely, romantic piece. Sandra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SmartChick- This is such a soft and tender write. Just lovely. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Thanks for sharing your special place.What a beautiful way to describe the feelings of love. Peaches |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for you nice comments about my poem. I'm glad you all liked it. |
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