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Six Million Moons
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Six Million Moons |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Six Million Moons There are things in life that seem to take the very heart of us And, there are people who have more value then a plane of gold If lucky we can find the one who can chase away the rain Sometimes they can even bring us closure to a story never told... I know my eyes they tend to show a whole new kind of light I'm certain my minds direction is obvious I'm somewhere free When my distance it is recognized you ask of where I am And, to myself I say I'm in a place I should not be... Cause I'm looking in the eyes, the only eyes, I care to stare into And, I'm in the arms of the taken one not wanting to be anywhere else Six million moons may pass by and I will still he here Even though it is a dream I only dream myself... I'm somewhere fear can no longer call out my name I'm really resting on the edge of a mountain hanging over the sea Like it's velvet waters that resemble his hands all the same I sit here knowing I have no right in this world to want him this close to me... I know I'm not meant to walk the same road gentleness does My purpose is to lie still for the unwanted in the night So, I take myself to my familiar sands where I can have patience at hand Asking why I just don't deserve to know what this man is like... For six million moons to pass by is a song only forever knows If that is how long I can remain here then I'll never leave Because I can sing forever, too, if it's my dream I am making And, not even eternity can wash away his effect on me... He can't go anywhere for the principle of why I stand before him But, I have six million moons to go through to dream and redream So, when my distance it is recognized and you ask of where I am Forgive me if I don't reply for I am in a place I should not be... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But, I have six million moons to go through to dream and redream So, when my distance it is recognized and you ask of where I am Forgive me if I don't reply for I am in a place I should not be..." this is amazing, I really like the way you did this.....excellent!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to wait this long for something that you desire. . . very emotionally charged work here my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, your lovely words are always a gem, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Six million moons from now, your inspirations and love will be endless! (kiss on cheek) I love this so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Six million moons. Oh how lovely is that. beautiful poem . floria |
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