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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-12-10 06:17 PM


“FOREVER AND A DAY”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My heart is with sadness, weeping
like the rain that is falling on
me, meeting the tears from
both eyes, as they run down
my face, and I feel, as
if I am drowning…

My lips are wet with the
onslaught, and my
senses heavy with
a foreboding
that has
overcome me…

But you touch me with a tender
caress, and teach me of
your loving ways,
a pardon, when I was
overwhelmed with
it all…

I’m surrounded by your
touch, knowing the serenity
of your spirit that has
offered me peace, and
saying you would love me
forever, and a day…
~~~~


[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 12-10-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-10 06:20 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is so so beautiful, I'm so happy that you have love to forever bring hope and love to your tears and share your feelings with always! (sigh) May true love forever blossom in your heart, sweet Bill, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Carol Luna
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2 posted 2001-12-10 06:21 PM


This is poignant and moving, Bill.

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-10 06:22 PM


*sigh* sounds like you are a very lucky man and that someone is a very lucky lady. This heartfelt poem is beautiful and gives me joy that you are loved so well. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-12-10 07:28 PM


Yes, sometimes love can be a little overwhelming.  Excellent write Bill!
Hugs, Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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5 posted 2001-12-11 12:13 PM


it's amazing isn't it?  these feelings that come so quickly. . .

you tell them well my friend. . .

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6 posted 2001-12-11 11:11 AM


Spiritual and beautiful, Bill.  Nothing quite like a touch of love, understanding, and forgiveness...

-MVS

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7 posted 2001-12-30 07:24 AM


Hope the tender moments last forever.
Lovely poem.

Deb

Kethry
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8 posted 2001-12-30 07:32 AM


Bill,
I'm so glad this has come back, may it be here... forever and a day.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Ariana
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9 posted 2001-12-30 08:38 AM


BC:  Isn't wonderful when you have someone to lean on and understand you when you are down and out. Nicely done.
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10 posted 2001-12-30 07:45 PM


Bill darling boy this is truly fabulous, why didn't I see this earlier? Okay i know I've not been on site because of Christmas and all but I still want to know how I missed this beauty. Well thank the lord for my library is all I can say, and that I have you tracked. It's okay kid I promise a bit of tracking doesn't hurt, it's when you're cornered that's when the trouble starts. Luckily you know I don't go in for cornering.

Wonderful writing and I truly think you're getting better moment by moment.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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11 posted 2001-12-30 08:12 PM


Lovely words as always Bill..a special kind of love..

                                  ~Victoria~

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12 posted 2001-12-30 08:15 PM


Bill. how wonderful to have someone like that in your life. she sounds wonderful and this was a great write. floria
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13 posted 2001-12-30 08:15 PM


BC...another superb write...a very happy one
too...Much enjoyed...

Best to you in the New Year...

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14 posted 2001-12-30 08:35 PM


Sadness touched by Salvation. Whether love and peace by the touch of God or by the touch of a woman...your life was touched, your hope renewed.  Thanks for this gem of a poem.  ***Ivy Rose
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15 posted 2001-12-30 08:41 PM


Bill,this is a beauty of a poem. Hope you have a very Happy New Year.
Sandra

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