Open Poetry #17 |
Forever And A Day |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“FOREVER AND A DAY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ My heart is with sadness, weeping like the rain that is falling on me, meeting the tears from both eyes, as they run down my face, and I feel, as if I am drowning… My lips are wet with the onslaught, and my senses heavy with a foreboding that has overcome me… But you touch me with a tender caress, and teach me of your loving ways, a pardon, when I was overwhelmed with it all… I’m surrounded by your touch, knowing the serenity of your spirit that has offered me peace, and saying you would love me forever, and a day… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bill, this is so so beautiful, I'm so happy that you have love to forever bring hope and love to your tears and share your feelings with always! (sigh) May true love forever blossom in your heart, sweet Bill, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
This is poignant and moving, Bill. Carol Luna |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sounds like you are a very lucky man and that someone is a very lucky lady. This heartfelt poem is beautiful and gives me joy that you are loved so well. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, sometimes love can be a little overwhelming. Excellent write Bill! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's amazing isn't it? these feelings that come so quickly. . . you tell them well my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Spiritual and beautiful, Bill. Nothing quite like a touch of love, understanding, and forgiveness... -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hope the tender moments last forever. Lovely poem. Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, I'm so glad this has come back, may it be here... forever and a day. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC: Isn't wonderful when you have someone to lean on and understand you when you are down and out. Nicely done. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is truly fabulous, why didn't I see this earlier? Okay i know I've not been on site because of Christmas and all but I still want to know how I missed this beauty. Well thank the lord for my library is all I can say, and that I have you tracked. It's okay kid I promise a bit of tracking doesn't hurt, it's when you're cornered that's when the trouble starts. Luckily you know I don't go in for cornering. Wonderful writing and I truly think you're getting better moment by moment. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely words as always Bill..a special kind of love.. ~Victoria~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill. how wonderful to have someone like that in your life. she sounds wonderful and this was a great write. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...another superb write...a very happy one too...Much enjoyed... Best to you in the New Year... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sadness touched by Salvation. Whether love and peace by the touch of God or by the touch of a woman...your life was touched, your hope renewed. Thanks for this gem of a poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill,this is a beauty of a poem. Hope you have a very Happy New Year. Sandra |
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