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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Odd I dreamt of you in minds embrace. Within my own secluded place My thoughts entwined like subtle rhyme. And planned each night of wondrous time. We met within a notions club Drank magic potions with our grub And browsed among the rainbow lights Where music played through out the night. We opened up the options door And tangoed on the dancing floor. Where mood and movement served the scheme Where mellow feel was not all dream. We leaned into the fantasy And weaved within the ecstasy. We swung and swayed in pure believe By everything we could conceive. And there we reach elite of charm Where sleep gives us the most disarm Where mind can reach it's full content Without realities consent. It is a way I pursue, but In truth, it may not work for you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I had this dream once. I hated when the carriage turned back into a pumpkin. But even that was not so bad, compared to WAKING. Lifting my coffee cup to ya, sy! Thanks for the morning verse!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, there is nothing odd about this poem it is as even as can be. I paticularly like this line. Drank magic potions with our grub Good write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sy Oh that magical dream - what a wonderful thought. We all fantasize and it is such a wonderful trip. Just like Alice in Wonderland. Thanks for the journey into Dreamland. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WELL IT WORKS FOR ME!!!!!  *L*(I'll be back) [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (12-29-2001 08:15 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Hope you enjoyed your holiday thanks for the good write. Serenity, Just a doughnut for breakfast. *L* Ariana, A fun write, glad you enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'm being pull out for breakfast I'LL BE BACK |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful dream, Sy. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dreamt of you in minds embrace. ================================= My thoughts entwined like subtle rhyme. ================================== We met within a notions club Drank magic potions with our grub  ================================= We opened up the options door And tangoed on the dancing floor. ================================== We swung and swayed in pure believe By everything we could conceive. =================================== Where mind can reach it's full content Without realities consent. It is a way I pursue, but In truth, it may not work for you. ==================================== Im back....I was burning the bacon LOL I just had to come back and highlight the verses of WAAAAY COOL... Stinky you took us to that Nirvana that tis your mind with this one... so many cool phrases....so many cool rhymes and images... only you could come up with this..... We opened up the options door I do so love the way your mind works ... very very cool poem Sy-babes. Where mind can reach it's full content Without realities consent. It is a way I pursue, but In truth, it may not work for you. OH YEAH .... It WORKS FOR ME. *winkiewinkie*  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You put me in a dancing mood..even though i just opened my eyes ha...good one Sy.. ~Victoria~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, what a vivid and fascinating enchanting dream, I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) You always write fantasy and emotion in all its beauty! May you alweays hold onto your dreams! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Not Odd at all...I love to weave fantasies like this one even though they may never become reality. I love the weaving of this one. A wonderful start to my day. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Enjoyed the read. Nicely written. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very enjoyable read...nothing odd about it at all. Enchanting! Hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow... this certainly is a divine dream! Now, why can't mine be like this? The imagery in this piece is amazing. The pictures painted in my mind left me speechless. Thanks for sharing this with us! --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I had fun getting inside this. It sounds such a happy place. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Smart Chick, Thanks for reading. *L* JM, In a dream you can open any door you like, nest par? WW R S Victoria, well hold that mood. *L* Mistletoe, Thanks for the hats off. Startime, Thanks for the hugs and kisses. *L* Tim, Thanks for the nicely. Nancy, Thanks for the hugs. *L* Marie, Thanks for the read, *L* Sandra, Did you open the options door? *L* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Works for me too! Loving this, I am...wunnerful, wunnerful! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sy, Ilove this.You draw me in.Hope I have this dream tonight. peaches |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm on a Sy hunt...I've missed you on my early morning rounds...forgive me if you feel light and airy today...I'm making up for lost time! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Glad it works for you too. *L* Peaches, I hope so too, *L* Sunshine, Where have you been, I missed you. *L* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seymour....nicely done...I could see myself there...you worked hard to write this one.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, It is a work of pleasure, thank you. |
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