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Tangled Moonlight
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Tangled Moonlight |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Tangled moonlight Deep sky, softly Sweeping desire Of love Silky eyes laughing Intricately weaving Reflection in a Silver spring Clouds among The rivers bend Dancing alone and Free there upon The midnights end A blowing breeze of times Surrounds the night in Purple song Caressing deeper touches Golden heaven of passion Softly sweeping Love ~~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yes definatly describe that feeling of love and I love it  I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Greeneyes hi there......... a lovely and awesome words which moved my whole senses welldone my dear and keep up the good work |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Moonlight and romance somehow go together to create magic and you have woven a magical poem filled with them. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A picture painted better than with a thousand words!  I see the rays of the nights coming moon tangling with the dying light of day, as the intruding mist rises from a searching river bed. I feel at peace with this vision ... breathtaking!! Thank you for the wonderous view!! |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
ooooohhhh I love the moon..~~~~~~~~~ Carolina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
definitely not as tangled now. . . great job Lauren. . . a different view here. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lauren, this was so beautiful...words flowed perfectly together panting a beautiful view for your readers, just beautiful! take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I can see that your trips to our workshop have paid off. Your writing has very much improved. Excellent, my friend. This is a keeper. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
Your words are intricately woven like the finest of lace, enchanting! PL |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Very lovely poem here. I love poems about the moon the stars and Love. -------------- |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Peekaboo Expressive bafflement. *Grins* You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A blowing breeze of times ... a very peaceful write, Lauren. Makes one feel contented. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thanks to all of you who responded to this, I appreciate the comments and thoughts... be well be safe  Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The journies of life and love as seen by you is always such a wonderful treasure of time. I love the way you bring the freshness of your style and vision to us in such wonderful ways. Beautiful writing and an excellent read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - I like your words very much. A very romantic writing, my favorite... BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A blowing breeze of times Surrounds the night in Purple song" absolutely gorgeous! I like this part best. just so beautiful |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh wow you guys, I am so humbled by these responses....thank you.... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, You ended this so perfectly! So pretty Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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