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Sleepy Morning
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Sleepy Morning |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SLEEPY MORNING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ My eyes open and I look at her lovely face, serene, peaceful, in the soft light of mornings glow… I smell the fragrance of perfumed hair, delicate with the aroma of her, and I am drawn closer, as she still sleeps… My fingers touch her face, and when she awakes, a smile greets me, as the warmth of her touch beckons me… I hold her closer in my arms, and we speak things of yesterday, today, and what might be. Her caring thoughts, and dreams she whispers to me, and I share another beautiful sleepy morning, with her… ~~~~ |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
you know, I used to feel this way, what happens to people after they've been together for years and years and years.......???? Dennis |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dennis - I read your reply, and can only say this. And you have probably heard it already. It's called 'working on it', everyday. It's also called complacency, which happens when one doesn't work on it everyday... And if not, then it disintegrates... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Bill, I too have always dreamed of what it must feel like to wake right beside true love in the morning and the happiness that shines in loves smile! (big hugggssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet friend, may the beauty of love forever shine in your heart every day and every night! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC: Your reply to Dennis is definitely correct, but complacency is a two-sided coin and both partners must work on it, not just one or you will get total destruction. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....WHAT A WAY TO WAKE UP!!.... *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill dearest friend I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous How absolutely first rate is this. I truly love the feel of this one it really reminds me of those early morning moments.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy [This message has been edited by Marsha (12-31-2001 02:35 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You've captured well one of the greatest pleasures of loving a woman, Bill. Enjoyed much! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
One of my favorites bill...ooooozing with tenderness, simply lovely  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
You reckon you could be "cloned"...I could sure use one of you......Beautiful poem for obviously one lucky gal!!   ~lewisone~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Looks like one lucky lady you have there Bill. Beautifully written. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill, this is simply a very soft and treasurable write... Working on it...YEP...this is the term I use as well...Always trying to be working on it. Never thinking that it is just good enough. Well done Sir.... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This was so tender. I love it. Oh if all marriages and or couples could be like this. floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bill, this is a wonderful poem and thank you for your recent kind replies, I deeply appreciate them. I am/Kathleen/ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Bill, this is a lovely piece you have done. It does take two and for over 31 years I have been blessed to wake up to a man that makes me feel this special. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh bill, you are such a charmer! I hope someday to have a husband are dear as you! love, RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* keeping love and romance alive does take work. Too often we think that is just suppose to happen..*sigh* this beautiful poem gave me a vision of two people waking up and deciding they will love each other that day and showing first thing in the morning. *sigh* what a pleasure it would be to be with someone who understood that love takes work but is worth it. MAGNIFICENT, Bill. I love it. **hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thanks to all - I really want to reply to each and everyone, but the excuse is, I have to go out for the New Year. So, thanks to you all, and I'm very glad that it was one to like... And Happy New Years everyone!!!!!!!! BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - Just to let everyone know last night was a great time. thanks again... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes working on it is good...I call it appreciating what you have...James |
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