Dear Phantom Lover (Poet DeVine's Challenge)

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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-28 10:39 PM

Dear Phantom Lover

Hot passion trembles through my hands
as I find words to write
My body fills with love’s demands
while flames in me ignite

My words burn from heart to pen
as thoughts fill with desire
Please come to me tonight again
to feed this burning fire

Brown eyes ablaze as feelings flow
and beckon you to me
A sensual kiss I’ll bestow
heating us by degree

Recline within my soft embrace
upon my beating heart
With soft fingers, your flesh, I’ll trace
as shivers they impart

Dear Phantom lover hear my call,
come join with me tonight
May this vision hold you enthral
and each of us excite

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-12-28 11:06 PM

Wheweeeee.....

Karen....the fires are burning tonight...
Goodness...but this is a good one for the
challenge....

Wow...I love your Phantom Lover Poems...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-12-28 11:24 PM

Mmm, this is a good one. Wish I could have some of these wonderful dreams!
Sandra

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2001-12-28 11:26 PM

Ok, where are these challenges posted?
I'm a few yards short of a field goal.
This was intoxicating and I wanna sip.
Just kidding, kinda.

You write so nice star.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-12-28 11:26 PM

whew! very sensual

you met the challenge with HEAT!!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2001-12-29 12:18 PM

A hot one, Karen...
Beautifully penned!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2001-12-29 12:21 PM

Send him over here haa..if you dont mind..
good one Karen...

~Victoria~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-12-29 07:48 AM

Karen,
Hot poem! I love a phantom lover...I think ist has something to do with the mask

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2001-12-29 08:05 AM

Karen
When the Phantom gets there, and after he has cooled off with you, please send him my way. Whew - or maybe he has a twin brother. Nicely done.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

9 posted 2001-12-29 08:17 AM

I think this poem didn't juz excite you and your Phantom Lover...

It excited us all... This is such a sensual poem, so lovely and romantic.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2001-12-29 08:21 AM

Very good, Star. I just love reading your poems. Uou did this challenge very well.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-12-30 01:59 AM

Karen-
   I'd say you met this challenge well.
   Beautifully done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

12 posted 2001-12-30 07:55 AM

Oh..so romantic. Yes, you did meet this challenge. Into my library!

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