Open Poetry #17 |
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Final Choices |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state ![]() |
what was your last choice? In what tone was your last voice? what means would be the end of all reason? what seams would you rip to end all seasons? Why answer these questions when doing yourself in? What recourse would you face when dumped in a bin? Why then not take the elixir of all reliefs abandon your soul, relax worries and beliefs. Why then ask for an extended holiday when parting this earth has been on your tray. Who me suggesting that you exit form worldly stages? whole worlds are stages where life merely engages. Again I present you with one last chance its a magic stone your own to romance, rub it and you will have the answer to your means while the question of life is still in your dreams. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-28-2001 02:37 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
That question of life can be so hard sometimes. Very in depth writing here. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martin, choices, choices what can one do with all the choices facing you dumped in the bin or take a chance perhaps bypass the cut of lance there's one thiny only I must do forget the choice and think of you. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Yes Gentile Spirit, hardly worth trying to answer..and yet we try. Keth, ![]() How sweet of you to think of me sipping orange juice and taking tea makes me think of writing Leonard Cohen style now that would nifty, I might gain some miles.lol ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Excellent poem, Martin.... I think chances and choices are the basic makeup of life. ![]() copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I think I was stronger on the chances though ![]() ![]() |
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