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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2001-12-27 05:39 PM

Not the place of your dreams
unexpected life forms in fantasia sing;
it's the uncanny we'd want to create,
a twisted reality used as fish bait.

A witch, turned dragon would burn poor Mick
an army of brooms would clean stairs slick;
Fire Bird Suite music was chosen to entertain,
as this feature length story would enter fame.

A certain lot, the audience will believe
the magic world is here to decieve;
mainstay characters are still on call
greeting studio visitors who have a ball.

Cartoon characters forever relate our fate
musical instruments play by date,
enchanted are the tales woven by elves
can we ever be ourselves?

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-27-2001 05:42 PM).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-12-27 05:47 PM

Well said, Martin. Many people don't want to be themselves....nicely done.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-27 06:47 PM

I am myself every single day.
Just once, for just a little bit, I wouldn't mind a fantasia moment....
People can be too serious too, ya know?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-12-27 08:58 PM

I haven't been myself in so long...
I don't remember what I'm really like....
Good write here....enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2001-12-27 09:18 PM

we can of course be ourselves but what would that be, but a collection of selves!Thankye
all for passng by.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2001-12-27 11:01 PM

Martin - Nicely done. Personally, I'm all for being someone else besides myself.lol

Dave

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2001-12-27 11:22 PM

Hi Dave,

I share your view, that's why I chose this mask for a bit ..it's emblematic of my playful self.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2001-12-28 10:48 PM

Beautifully written, Martin....
I love the playfulness of this one.
I just love pretending to be someone else, as long as I can come back anytime I want, to being me.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

8 posted 2001-12-28 11:05 PM

And its through you that I get to see these nifty smilies and icons.Glad to cheer you up now and then

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