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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-28 01:46 PM

Beneath the stars of a still night
A lonely man walks windy shore.
Taken away from beautiful sight
a love cherished and much adored.

The waves wash away the steps
of two who now becoming just one.
Waters washing where once slept
Love not forgotten and now undone.

Will love find the flame lost?
Taken away by fiercest of storm.
Should it just again be tossed
this love once held within an arm?

Moments of two as one before
as sighs and shudders so shook.
Left behind on a sandy sea shore
lost moments from true love’s book.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-12-28 01:48 PM

Moments of two as one before
as sighs and shudders so shook.
Left behind on a sandy sea shore
lost moments from true love’s book.

True loves book, what a wonderful idea. Loved the images and write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-28 02:36 PM

oh, this is, this is.....
yes, this is and I feel it

perfect!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-12-28 02:41 PM

You are on a roll today.. ha..loved it...

~Victoria~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-12-28 04:48 PM

Excellent romantic write as always Barry. Hugs.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

5 posted 2001-12-28 05:01 PM

Barry

Yes, you are definitely on a roll. I felt like I was on the shore with you. Great imagery.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-12-28 05:33 PM

Gentle Spirit...thank you very much...It is
just that kind of day today..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-28 05:34 PM

Sue...bless you for your warmth and sincerity
in your words...thanx...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-12-28 05:35 PM

Victoria..thank you, I am happy you liked
this poem.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-12-28 05:36 PM

Nancy...I enjoy your words...they always are
music to my mind...thank you..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-12-28 05:37 PM

Ariana...Yes..the seashore is a place for
love...to begin...and to contemplate when
it has been lost...Thank You...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2001-12-28 06:00 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Barry, I know just how you feel, and it always saddens me to see lovers hearts wash away by the tides and erase promises! (sigh) May your loves imprints forever rest on higher sands where no hurricanes of tears can ever reach! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-28 06:05 PM

Noah...thank you...very much young poet sir.

LadyShadowWalker
Junior Member

since 2001-12-27

Posts 15
Minnesota, USA

13 posted 2001-12-28 06:35 PM

I sense a theme going on here, magnus.. Love, true love, is rooted in your works (at least the ones I have come across so far) :-)

--Lady

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-12-28 06:40 PM

Lady...you will find that I write romance
a great part of my poetry...It has been
easy for me to write of..Just something that
I share...I write feelings... Thank you
for your thoughts..

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