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Open Poetry #17

Like a flame

LadyShadowWalker
Junior Member

since 2001-12-27

Posts 15
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2001-12-28 06:44 PM

A simple flame
flame of simplicity
showing its beauty
and majesty.

But as it grows,
the intensity changes
the flame becomes a fire
that burns within me.

Red, yellow, blue
all the hues and colors
that are entwined in my heart
Here in my heart
that is about to burst
dreams of love that
even the gods don't know
flow through my mind

His hands touch me
he knows of the flame,
the fire,
deep inside me
I love him.
He is mine.
I am his.
Together we have created this
fire of passion
that will forever live.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-28 06:47 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words of passion always light these blue pages with cheer! (smiles) May the magic of romance forever shine in your heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-12-28 06:49 PM

A beautiful and passionate poem...Well
written with feelings that come from within
yourself...Nicely done.

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