Open Poetry #17 |
Keeper Of My Heart |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I listen as you breath in the dark reflect on all we have become. Holding you while you sleep felt is the beating of your heart. Through the darkness sensing this closeness shared. Two hearts, sharing, this once in a lifetime kind of love. ~Your Dreams Are Mine My Dreams Are Yours.~ We are two souls united in love. My freedom is found lost in pools of sapphire while wading through your essence. My spirit fills with a peace. In serenity I drift off slumbering held in love by the keeper of my heart. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-28-2001 11:08 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Donna, such love in this! Such hope and love! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, I think there is always hope in love. I guess I will be a hopeless romantic all of my life..*s* Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just love the way this feels so soft and gentle, and so so in love beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I thank you for those kind words. Love can be a wonderful thing. Sometimes love just hurts like He-- but other times...aint it grande??!! Thanks hon. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, A lovely gentle write, enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, I am so glad that you enjoyed. I write them like I feel them. Thank you! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lost in pools of sapphire while wading through your essence. My spirit fills with a peace. In serenity I drift off ==================== well it doesnt get much better than this. beautiful, soft spoken sentiments GS...how lucky you are to touch this kind of content. well done poetess Donna. jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It truly doesn't get better than that Janet. I consider myself to be very lucky, blessed. Thanks JM, your words so appreciated. Hugs to you lil butterfly. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wonderful when you find that *keeper of your heart*..im happy for you Donna..hugs ~Victoria~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna, this is so pretty and gentle.... Love it, I do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Victoria, I thank you for that. I am indeed glad that I found this *keeper* Hugs On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, thank you! I am so glad that you enjoyed my soft thoughts... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
what what a gentle write in contrast to my end of life theme for the day May God grant peace and happiness for many many years to come, happy holidays again |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
After reading this all I can do smile take care! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Gentle Spirit...Your name so well describes this gentle, poem of intimacy and love. ENJOYED THIS!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
This evokes a feeling of peaceful contentment. One is lucky to have these feelings. Thank you for the share. |
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