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Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
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Orlando, Florida

0 posted 2001-12-31 01:27 PM


Goodbye My Love

Goodbye to our home that we had spent
endless hours in

Goodbye to our future that we had
carefully planned and invested in

Goodbye to the confidence and satisfaction
I felt as your friend, soulmate and lover

All is gone ……….. now and forever.

I have wanted to say goodbye.To let
you go- to push you out of my
life like you have done with me.

Words would not come – my stomach was queezy.
Life in itself without you hasn’t been easy.
But, I must let you go, a hard lesson to learn
Goodbye My Love

Ariana

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-31 01:46 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ariana, this is so sad but so beautiful! I pray this isn't actually related to a current experience, and that you will live an eternal future of true love and happiness. (kiss on cheek) Sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ariana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ariana
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Orlando, Florida
2 posted 2001-12-31 01:51 PM


Noah:  I can always depend on you for kind words and loving thoughts.  Thank you for stopping by and thank you for just "being you". I appreciate your kindness.
Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-12-31 02:58 PM


Very sad but well penned Ariana.
Sometimes it is hard to find the words to say goodbye.
Happy New Year, hugs, Nancy.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-12-31 03:29 PM


Ariana, this is so sad. I know how hard it is to say goodbye. I wish you the very best.
Thank you for sharing this. I hope this coming new year is alot better for you.

HAPPY NEW YEAR


strbbux
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5 posted 2001-12-31 04:27 PM


This is very sad Ariana, Life can sometimes be very difficult. good write. floria
RosePetal
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6 posted 2001-12-31 04:49 PM


Oh my, I know how this feels too! Goodbyes are so very sad. I hope good things to come to you in the new year! Sometimes the best thing for us to do is the hardest thing for us to do! You will be just fine sweet Ariana!
(hugs)

RP

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2001-12-31 04:51 PM


Hello Ariana
So very heartfelt were your words and I can only hope that a special love may come your way and fill your life with the happiness you deserve.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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