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Across the Counter
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Across the Counter |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Countless objects in the count's account bottled formulae scratched on beaker mounts, teasing trials for the batch to succeed fudge reports so no audit can see. Fudge the flavour and the receipe don't judge a favour, reap a delicacy; test taste the product all around countless tastes of flavours abound. Bottle the tastes in countless ways cap the containers in endless displays, fudge the flavour, no audit can see work in a fever for the batch to succeed. Shelve countless products for humanity display trade names close to insanity; a count's account is easily spent for the aged, this is how pensions are spent! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-28-2001 11:01 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
for the aged, this is how pensions are spent! Sad...but true. Good write, ecrivan. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
there are a couple of friends at those companies that have some stories to tell Duncan, a treasure trove, alas!!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martin, Sad but true...and I'm getting close!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I agree with what Larry said.....I think I am getting closer also. Great writing, Martin.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Mdme Chip and Larry, think I'll change the title then, something to clinical about it, how about "Across the Counter" |
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