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Ousiders Cattermole
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0 posted 2001-11-13 07:34 PM


In the snowiest little village -
In the foliage by the woods,
To the quaintest little passage -
Is were the entrance stood.

So pass the tulips in yellow -
That bend amid a breeze,
And cross the snowy ever -
That catch the fallen leaves.

For here you'll find a stream -
To cross the autumn fold,
For here you'll come to dream -
"Everything touched is gold."

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-11-13 07:37 PM


For here you'll find a stream -
To cross the autumn fold,
For here you'll come to dream -
"Everything touched is gold."
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Lovely imagery and wonderful cadence...
Welcome to Poetry Land...this is the first Ive read of yours..I look forward to seeing more of your work.  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-13 07:39 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and gorgeous, sweet Ousiders, your beautiful words of tranquility and nature fill your golden words! (smiles) I love it! All your words are pure gold, sweet friend, they're so beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-13 10:21 PM


This is lovely...perfect meter and rhyme!! Loved it.  
Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-11-13 10:55 PM


OH!  This is perfection!
Loved it much!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-11-14 10:21 AM



This touches me just right...

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-14 11:29 AM


Absolutely beautiful. The vision you have woven is a delight to the senses. I love it. Gosh this is well done. Into my library it goes.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-11-14 05:34 PM


OC~
Very lovely cadence to this piece, combined with great imagery~
Enjoyed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-12-11 02:56 AM



Ousiders Cattermole-
Oh..this is a beautiful little piece.
Really enjoyed reading this.
Hugs,
~Vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2001-12-11 06:26 AM


everything touched in the golden awe of Autumn. I love it!  

I am many.

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