Open Poetry #17 |
Everything Touched Is Gold |
Ousiders Cattermole Junior Member
since 2001-11-02
Posts 27 |
In the snowiest little village - In the foliage by the woods, To the quaintest little passage - Is were the entrance stood. So pass the tulips in yellow - That bend amid a breeze, And cross the snowy ever - That catch the fallen leaves. For here you'll find a stream - To cross the autumn fold, For here you'll come to dream - "Everything touched is gold." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For here you'll find a stream - To cross the autumn fold, For here you'll come to dream - "Everything touched is gold." =============================== Lovely imagery and wonderful cadence... Welcome to Poetry Land...this is the first Ive read of yours..I look forward to seeing more of your work. You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and gorgeous, sweet Ousiders, your beautiful words of tranquility and nature fill your golden words! (smiles) I love it! All your words are pure gold, sweet friend, they're so beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely...perfect meter and rhyme!! Loved it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH! This is perfection! Loved it much! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This touches me just right... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful. The vision you have woven is a delight to the senses. I love it. Gosh this is well done. Into my library it goes. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OC~ Very lovely cadence to this piece, combined with great imagery~ Enjoyed~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ousiders Cattermole- Oh..this is a beautiful little piece. Really enjoyed reading this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
everything touched in the golden awe of Autumn. I love it! I am many. |
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