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As close as it gets
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As close as it gets |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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For Noah While in my childhood I had the most beautiful dreams Alot of things misunderstood Or so it seems I was daddy's little girl So I wanted a guy just like dad He sheltered me from the world Chasing away the boyfriends I had I searched the world thoroughly Looking in every direction but when it comes to perfection You're as close as it gets You're a good man I know dad would approve He'll just have to understand That I'm grown enough to choose In my eyes, you are perfect Of my gentle heart, you are worth it You bring me the utmost happiness Nothing is more important than this Before you I didn't know what love meant You've shown it to me unlike the rest I know things can't be perfect 100 percent but we're at 99, it's as close as it gets I want to rest in the clouds Sight-see way up there Mingle in the angel crowd but there's no halo in my hair Someday I'll be in heaven but for now, you're as close as it gets! [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Joanna.....love looks beautiful on you! AND...you write it so well! All the best to you and Noah! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG KISS ON LIPS) Oh my gosh, I cried throughout this whole poem, it's soooooooooo beautiful! (sigh) You're the closest thing to heaven for me, and I love you with all my heart! (kiss on lips) Mmmmmmmmm...I love you! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
 HOW WONDERFUL! and sweet...and from your heart. enjoyed!  I am many. [This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm looks like a romance has started right before my eyes. Happiness to you both. Sandra |
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