Another Perspective on SEA's "A Deeper Kind of Ache"

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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 2001-12-27 11:31 AM

This is an old SEAdog's perception of what the woman must be thinking in re the wonderful poem Susan (SEA) wrote:

I wish he would come across the floor,
Take a tentative step through the light
Stammer out a nervous request to dance,
Make me feel like a woman tonight.

I wish he would gather up his nerve,
And not worry what others thought,
I wish he'd beg me for just one dance,
And not worry about the cost.

His eyes meet mine from across the floor,
I smile and beckon, "Come here."
He's fallen for my feminine charms,
His eyes drink me as he draws near.

"May I have this dance?" he requests,
As I let my body softly sway.
"Not a chance!" I loudly proclaim
Then laugh as he slinks away.

OK - Maybe this doesn't happen all the time, but it sure seemed that way to me

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (12-27-2001 11:45 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-27 11:35 AM

(giggles in delight) Oh Mike, it is always so exciting to read your expressions on how you feel reading other peoples poems! (smiles) Susan will love this I'm sure, you are a treasure to us all! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mike, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

2 posted 2001-12-27 11:38 AM

it started out so delightful, then you made him trip and fall ROFL how funny....I would never say no like that....you are so silly

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 2001-12-27 11:43 AM

Toe Angel - Thanks for those words of encouragement.

Susan - Does this mean you will dance with me if I ask? woo hoo - I prefer slow dances that last long enough for my sweaty palms to leave handprints all over my partner's back - heh. Oh, and that rash I've got? The doctor says the latex gloves can come off in another week or two. I hope you like my scruffie whiskers... sometimes it's too much trouble to shave (or even bathe!). When can we dance? heh

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

4 posted 2001-12-27 11:46 AM

*giggling* this is just too cute. I love it. **hugs**

You are just the poet to bring a giggling from me.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-12-27 11:48 AM

Oh, LJ!! Have missed your laughter and "winks of poetry!" And for the record, I don't have the heart to turn down anyone brave enough to ask--I generally just LIE and tell them that I am not quite accustomed to my prosthetic leg!

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-12-27 11:50 AM

ROFL. Come on, we women could never be this cruel!!! And here I was reading the first few verses, thinking.."what a lovely romantic poem Mike has written here", then you got that zinger in at the end. Too cute

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2001-12-27 11:52 AM

latex gloves - kewl

ROFL....

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-12-27 12:43 PM

LJA,
Does she know you kick kitties. LOL

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

9 posted 2001-12-27 01:07 PM

enjoyed your wit...some women do play it hard to get...and you wrote from their perspective well...

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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10 posted 2001-12-27 02:41 PM

LJA,
You're not bitter, by chance? LOL

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-12-27 03:45 PM

Well...I was taught never to turn a man down who came over to ask me to dance as it may have taken him quite a bit of courage. You were doing so well in the beginning of the poem, and then,...well, I knew it was too good to be true!
*Latex gloves?* hehehe....okay!
Hugs, Nancy.

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