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Reflections in the Glass
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Reflections in the Glass |
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CondorSey Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 28Dam-Nation |
Looking through the glass, I see my familiar fish. The glum creature swims sluggishly through the contained water, bound by the glass barrier, unable to go no further, forever, in this enclosed state, never to feel new sensations, or explore wondrous places, just swim, side to side, a tap on the glass startles momentarily, but he goes back about his pointless, business only to come up for the daily feed, before eventually floating to the top. Looking to the looking glass, I see my familiar face. Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love this! I have a fish  iambic- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh well put...I remember when we had fish...you capture more than just your fish in this poem. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...I love fish too, your words make it seem like we are staring into a frozen pond about to catch one! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Condor, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well, I used to want a fish...... no really, this is fantastic....I really like the way you did the comparison |
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