THE TEMPTRESS (not related to our sweet temptress in any way)

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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-27 12:22 PM

This is a character that I have developed for a book I am working on...she in no way is a reflection on our Temptress...for this one has no soul....I hope you enjoy her. **hugs**

THE TEMPTRESS

She is all your deepest fantasies
as she uses the power of words
and smiles of secret guile
telling of ways to pleasure
she lures men to her cold arms

Promising with her words of power
she sends them into your ears
with softest caressing breeze
to course through your veins
setting your passions into flame

She knows your secrets
locked away in the deepest
part of your mind and she will
probe with the ways
of a seductress to bring
hidden desires to light

You look deep into her dark eyes
and see flames of passion
you have never tasted before
starting your heart to pounding
as the Temptress opens
her arms and beckons to you

She promises a journey
to send the senses reeling
and body tingling as you respond
to all that she is
and all that she will give

The Temptress beckons you
to taste of her hidden treasures
that you may learn that
mortal love is just of the body
and she can satisfy all you
would ever hope or dream for

For she is THE TEMPTRESS
and there is no eternal love in her
she will feed your body with delight
unknown and leave you
begging for a love she cannot give

She is THE TEMPTRESS
cold, perfect, flesh to wrap
herself around men of earth
and drain desire of love eternal
with her hidden sensual fires

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-12-27 12:28 PM

Karen,
Santa said be careful what you wish for. LOL

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-12-27 12:33 PM

For she is THE TEMPTRESS
and there is no eternal love in her
she will feed your body with delight
unknown and leave you
begging for a love she cannot give

Sure wish I'd read this a year ago...lol. Great character you're building. Looking forward to more, I think.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-12-27 07:35 AM

Karen, this person is not limited to the female sex, I'm thinking. Cause I'm sure I know a man just like this.
Very well portrayed character.
Sandra

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

4 posted 2001-12-27 08:21 AM

Karen
Fantastic tale you have woven. I too know some men who are like this. Beware of the TEMPTRESS!!!!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

5 posted 2001-12-27 03:12 PM

This is wonderful! You described an evil temptress perfectly. I agree, it's definitely not anything like our Jenn, though.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

6 posted 2001-12-27 03:20 PM

Karen - Yanno, I've known this girl!!! She's really not all that bad, and she's great the next morning when a guy wants to get away without promising to call... heh

If you are going through Hell...then keep moving!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-27 03:30 PM

This is terrific Karen! *still giggling at LongJhn's reply* Can't wait to here more about this temptress. Hugs.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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