Open Poetry #17 |
THE TEMPTRESS (not related to our sweet temptress in any way) |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is a character that I have developed for a book I am working on...she in no way is a reflection on our Temptress...for this one has no soul....I hope you enjoy her. **hugs** THE TEMPTRESS She is all your deepest fantasies as she uses the power of words and smiles of secret guile telling of ways to pleasure she lures men to her cold arms Promising with her words of power she sends them into your ears with softest caressing breeze to course through your veins setting your passions into flame She knows your secrets locked away in the deepest part of your mind and she will probe with the ways of a seductress to bring hidden desires to light You look deep into her dark eyes and see flames of passion you have never tasted before starting your heart to pounding as the Temptress opens her arms and beckons to you She promises a journey to send the senses reeling and body tingling as you respond to all that she is and all that she will give The Temptress beckons you to taste of her hidden treasures that you may learn that mortal love is just of the body and she can satisfy all you would ever hope or dream for For she is THE TEMPTRESS and there is no eternal love in her she will feed your body with delight unknown and leave you begging for a love she cannot give She is THE TEMPTRESS cold, perfect, flesh to wrap herself around men of earth and drain desire of love eternal with her hidden sensual fires Karen TorbiakĀ© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Santa said be careful what you wish for. LOL |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For she is THE TEMPTRESS and there is no eternal love in her she will feed your body with delight unknown and leave you begging for a love she cannot give Sure wish I'd read this a year ago...lol. Great character you're building. Looking forward to more, I think. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, this person is not limited to the female sex, I'm thinking. Cause I'm sure I know a man just like this. Very well portrayed character. Sandra |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Karen Fantastic tale you have woven. I too know some men who are like this. Beware of the TEMPTRESS!!!! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is wonderful! You described an evil temptress perfectly. I agree, it's definitely not anything like our Jenn, though. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karen - Yanno, I've known this girl!!! She's really not all that bad, and she's great the next morning when a guy wants to get away without promising to call... heh If you are going through Hell...then keep moving! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is terrific Karen! *still giggling at LongJhn's reply* Can't wait to here more about this temptress. Hugs. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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