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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-27 10:44 AM

(For my Joanna)

There's Something About You
By: Noah Eaton
12/27/01

I stare into your photograph
With a desire I can't subside
The way you make me smile
Looking into your deep emerald eyes
I beacon for your gentle caress
I yearn to be by your side
You're the girl of my arms, but will I ever be able to have you
Whatever happens, I will try

My dear, there's something about you, love
You're everything I want
My dear, there's something about you, love
I have to hold on

Every night before I fall asleep
I can almost feel your lips touching mine
Wondering what it's like to have another heart beating
Against my own for all time
I feel my journey is complete
But I still have miles to go
Reach for my hand, my love, I need you now
I just want you to love you so...

My dear, there's something about you, love
You're everything I want
My dear, there's something about you, love
I just have to hold on

Look at me now, I'm just a hopeless romantic
Trying to paddle to your shores in time
How can I go the distance to hold you?
How can I make you mine?
I just want you to know...
I just want you to know that...

My dear, there's something about you, love
You're everything I want
My dear, there's something about you, love
I have to hold on...

I just want you to know...
I want you to know...
I just want you to know how much I love you so
I have to hold on...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-27-2001 10:45 AM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-27 10:49 AM

Noah, I do believe the love bug has bitten you! This is lovely!

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2001-12-27 10:55 AM

Noah,
you have such a sweet heart....many blessings to you in the coming year.

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

3 posted 2001-12-27 10:56 AM

This is sooo sweet Noah!   The style of writing here is great.  I like the song-like poemabout your desire to hold your loved one.  I hope one day you are united and will spend the rest of your lives together in happiness!

   From your good friend
      Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-12-27 10:58 AM

Noah,

Awwwwwww.... so sweet Noah

; You have such an amazing soul

Joanna is lucky to have such an amazing guy. I'm she knows and is holding on just as tight.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-12-27 12:44 PM

This is romantic poetry at its best. Such wonderful verses, such wonderful emotions. Love this Noah, what a heart you have.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-12-27 01:06 PM

Noah,
You convinced me I'm sure you did her. Lovely write.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

7 posted 2001-12-27 01:37 PM

Noah - You have to fight these feelings, son, or you will be doomed! Try kicking kitties. It's fun, and it will keep away these women who are soft and round and want you. Take it from me, kicking kitties is healthy.

BTW - You wrote a sweet poem.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-12-27 02:17 PM

Noah, Joanna is a lucky lady.
(and don't listen to Long John)
Sandra

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

9 posted 2001-12-27 02:27 PM

Noah
I agree - the Love Bug has taken a big bite out of you.  You are hopelessly romantic.
I enjoyed your writing.

PS:  Don't listen to those other guys - just listen to us women for the right answers.  Only kidding guys.

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

10 posted 2001-12-27 05:25 PM

Noah, This is a great poem. I hope sometime you will get the chance to be with Joanna.

good work

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly. Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams go, life is a barren field

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-01-02 02:50 AM

I know that you want to ride on that train of love...get your ticket to ride...James

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