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ecrivan
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0 posted 2001-12-27 01:15 AM


Six senses because the five are not enough
we forget that in the spirit world it's tough:
men were oft shot and killed with no trial,
women sought their doom by swallowing a vial.

If I can see the dead, what do you think
the eye of the sixth sense does not blink,
there are spirit currents all around
as the discontented dead walk round.

In stupor they aimlessly amble
killed by a motives that twist and scramble,
they're caught in limbo between two worlds
their spirit cannot rest till justice unfurls.







© Copyright 2001 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-27 09:40 AM


ooooooooo
I like this a lot!!!
I loved that movie, wish there
were more of that quality about
the subject out there
nicely done!

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2 posted 2001-12-27 12:42 PM




(sigh) Ah byes, the sixth sense, I too loved that movie a lot! (sigh) I believe we all kind of have this metaphysical side to ourselves, where we can read other peoples feelings through expression! (big hugggsssss) So very well said, dearest friend, you are a treasure to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-27 12:55 PM


Ecrivan,
Good mood, good write, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2001-12-27 01:10 PM


That's it, work that pineal gland!!!

I just KNEW you would!

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5 posted 2001-12-27 01:13 PM


Great write, I like I like, very much

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

ecrivan
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6 posted 2001-12-27 05:08 PM


Yes, the movie was the backdrop for this even though occult topics are a long time coming,still the cadence could have been better!Thanks girls and guys for clicking in.


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