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When I Woke
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When I Woke |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN I WOKE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When I woke this morning, all I felt like doing was running away to somewhere, so I did, and ended up at my most favorite place… It’s a location where I find serenity and truth, with snow capped mountains which rise into the bluest of skies, from the calmest waters I have ever seen, or known… I found this place some time ago, when my heart was sad, and I always end up there when I no longer feel that I am worthy, or can’t go on… It’s a setting created by the Lord, and He takes me there to calm and cleanse my soul, of the trials and tribulations of my inner being when it feels, as if it can no longer face, the coming day … ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your love shines in this beautiful piece and creates a special place of Love and beauty! (sigh) It must feel so special to feel this way, I too always dream of His love within me. God Bless You, and may the new year bring you greast love and cheer! (big hugggssssss) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A place where peace flows into you knowing He touched your soul A place where the sky is so blue and you again feel whole A place that He has created a scene the heart can rest A place where cleansing's awaited and you again feel blessed *sigh* Bill.....you have no idea how you truly touched me with this poem. I have a place in the mountains where I go and sit beside a stream and just feel all the beauty around me......I cannot explain well but the sound of the water mixed with the majesty of the mountains fills me with a sense that isn't completely of myself...there is healing and serenity...*sigh* the only part I am missing is the ocean....someday I will move back to the west coast and write while surrounded by a scene such as you have created with these words. That is my dream. **big hugs** thank you, so very very much.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill...know that you have a friend here that is just that...HERE...always with a listening ear... This is a beautiful but sad poem....I hope it does not reflect all of your feelings at this moment...I hope that Passions does help your days...I KNOW you have many friends here...for I am one... |
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