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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-23 11:20 AM


Window

Spirits will call
into the stars
questing in search
wanting it all

Such brilliant hues
soft and pliant
filled with color
so many views

Mists without time
drawing the eye
wrapped in the warmth
beautiful rhyme

I share with you
a vision so pure
flowing with love
made for us two

Magic it seems
woven so true
from heart's desire
Window of dreams

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-23 11:51 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, this reminded me a lot of D. Lester Young's window series! (smiles) Your window of your heart reflects the beauty of love and passion in all its splendor. (kiss on cheek) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, may the window of dreams reflect the true love of your life and bring happiness to you forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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2 posted 2001-12-23 12:18 PM


Window of dreams, I love this. and your rhyme is so good. strbbux
Magnus
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3 posted 2001-12-23 05:21 PM


Karen..let no man or woman ever say you can
not write beautiful words that touch hearts.

YOU CAN and YOU DO...

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2001-12-25 10:01 PM


Karen, these dreams are so rich when written through your inspired pen.
Happy Christmas
Sandra

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-12-26 04:44 PM



Karen-
Such lovely thoughts you've penned.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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