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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-26 01:25 PM


A Moment In Time

Just a single moment in time
when you reached out and touched my heart
As our feelings became divine
even though we are far apart

Your voice I then heard from afar
thrilling me as it flowed from you
Sent from beyond the furthest star
soaring into my soul, it flew

A kiss woven softly in dreams
where I could hold you in my arms
This places where love is as it seems
we melt into each other's charms

Just a single moment in time
when two hearts touch across distance
Writing gentle love's word in rhyme,
share the meaning of existence

Karen Torbiak 2001©


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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my own state
1 posted 2001-12-26 01:27 PM


touching love poem here, enjoyed it!


Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-26 01:32 PM


Ah....from Quebec you are.......I once lived near Quebec City.... I am glad you like my little dreams...someday my poems will have a base in reality. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-26 01:55 PM


lovely expression of being touched, Karen, just lovely.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

A Whisper's Caress
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4 posted 2001-12-26 01:56 PM



A kiss woven softly in dreams


just simply...sigh......

D.Lester Young
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5 posted 2001-12-26 02:53 PM


A very touching write that creates a spell of promise.
Logan
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6 posted 2001-12-26 02:57 PM


How very lovely, Startime and was most enjoyed...very gentle smille
Victoria
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7 posted 2001-12-26 02:58 PM


so mysterious is a voice from afar..lovely Karen...hugss

                   ~Victoria~

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8 posted 2001-12-26 03:36 PM


Lovely, Karen. If only those moments would last.
Sandra

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