Open Poetry #17 |
Silence in Love and Light |
Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
Oh silent is the moonlit night As silver shadow dance on sheets Lacey patterns in purple light As yellow races in rivulets to greet Oh! Freeze the now of natures seat Hush old moon and fall asleep As patterns of lace begin to fall Tears trace gently in silent weep For what is more beautiful all Then memories in the heart to keep of the greatest love felt true and deep? Beautiful, blessed silence knows well Amidst the softly falling snow In the fondling pastels Of expressions only our love shall know Silence in the night brings us closer to our souls For to awaken with created wings With mine love who truly sees Purifies the air as winter sings And flavors the snow with passions breeze Such as nature begins a earthen tease To Love you...Oh yes You! Is to know loves limit does not exist For even the stormy night has quiet hue Encased in softest mist When you give..tenderly..of your kiss... S.D.K. 12/21/01 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is splendid writing...I loved the creative rhyme scheme...great cadence... wonderful poetic phrasing...and imagery the whole write was full of energy in its inspire. very well done Virgo Rains. jm You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is a truly beautiful poem of love and tenderness. You have written the feelings so well, the reader gets the full essence of the magic. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, the sheer serenity of pure love echoes in your lovely visions! (smiles) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) I hope you had the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
The love and tenderness flow throughout these words.Nice job. peaches |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Virgo_Rains- This is really beautiful. Wonderful writing. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Awww! This poem is so romantic...loved the iamgery! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
Thank you Janet Marie, Tracey, Mistletoe Angel, Peaches, Vlrayne, and Domzi for your great comments...You are all inspirers of emotions from the heart VR |
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