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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-12-26 05:39 AM



I Wish You Love

I see before you golden skies
That flash of joy within your eyes
I was the one to realize
That pain would not be your demise
I wish you hope, a happy tear
I wish you love this coming year

For what was said, for what was done
You stuck together, all as one
And through your sorrow, still the sun
At times made rainbow colors come
I wish you strength above the fear
I wish you love this coming year

I watched you fall, I watched you stand
I watched your spirit take command
As life was not what you had planned
At times I offered you a hand
I wish your pathway straight and clear
I wish you love this coming year

There are some things, as stars of night
That still remain in dawning’s light
That never change from wrong to right
That never cease to cause your plight
And yet the golden skies are near
I wish you love this coming year

Your heart now harbored from the storm
Your friends abound, your home is warm
My brow is wet, my wings are shorn
But I’ve been here since you were born
I am your guardian angel, dear
I wish you love this coming year

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2001-12-26 07:39 AM


Dear Liz; I wish you the same! This poem touched me so much, it is as if my guardian Angel wrote this...but then you are an Angel yourself! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Nan
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2 posted 2001-12-26 08:49 AM


Liz - You ARE love.. You emanate love.. and  you give it freely... I wish you a wonderful New Year, my loving friend...
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-12-26 09:00 AM


Elizabeth,
You have my love the comming year. Sy

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-12-26 09:34 AM


What a gorgeous poem Liz. I hope my guardian angel is watching as closely as this one is.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-12-26 09:39 AM


Your loving heart shines illuminate your words, Wish you all the best for coming year.

May God Bless you dear Liz!

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-12-26 11:04 AM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet Elizabeth, you are a true angel to us all and we all wish you hope and love for the New Year too! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-26 11:19 AM


Thank you VERY much, Elizabeth. This is exactly what I was hoping for - to find love. Thank you of for such a generous wish, and of coz, I wish the same for you too. Someone as sweet as you should be loved and cherished for alwayz.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Martie
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8 posted 2001-12-26 11:20 AM


Liz--There are so many wonderful poems in you, each one a treasure beyond belief.  We are so lucky to be able to read it here...and Liz..I wish you love!
peaches73533
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9 posted 2001-12-26 11:27 AM


Liz, You always express love so wonderfully.I love reading your writes.This gives me a sense of peace.I know you have an angel watching over you like this.
Peaches

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10 posted 2001-12-26 12:20 PM


Liz - If anybody deserves love, it is you.  You are a fine, fine person.
vlraynes
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11 posted 2001-12-26 07:07 PM



Liz-
Such a beautifully penned wish.
I wish YOU love, my friend...and everything
else that brings you happiness and smiles.
Happy New Year.
Hugs,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Ariana
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12 posted 2001-12-27 08:57 AM


Liz:
This one is a keeper.  We all have guardian angels - sometimes we don't listen to them but they are always there.  I wish you happiness ad love too.

Opeth
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13 posted 2001-12-27 08:59 AM


This was well written and well rhymed. Sometimes...I think that I have a Guardian Angel watching over me...this reminded me of that thought.
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 2001-12-28 02:04 AM


Thank you all for reading and comenting,
Your remarks are much appreciated
I think my gaurdian angel was worn out this past year. She could use a rest
Liz

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