Open Poetry #17 |
I Wish You Love |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I Wish You Love I see before you golden skies That flash of joy within your eyes I was the one to realize That pain would not be your demise I wish you hope, a happy tear I wish you love this coming year For what was said, for what was done You stuck together, all as one And through your sorrow, still the sun At times made rainbow colors come I wish you strength above the fear I wish you love this coming year I watched you fall, I watched you stand I watched your spirit take command As life was not what you had planned At times I offered you a hand I wish your pathway straight and clear I wish you love this coming year There are some things, as stars of night That still remain in dawning’s light That never change from wrong to right That never cease to cause your plight And yet the golden skies are near I wish you love this coming year Your heart now harbored from the storm Your friends abound, your home is warm My brow is wet, my wings are shorn But I’ve been here since you were born I am your guardian angel, dear I wish you love this coming year Elizabeth Santos |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Liz; I wish you the same! This poem touched me so much, it is as if my guardian Angel wrote this...but then you are an Angel yourself! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Liz - You ARE love.. You emanate love.. and you give it freely... I wish you a wonderful New Year, my loving friend... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You have my love the comming year. Sy |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a gorgeous poem Liz. I hope my guardian angel is watching as closely as this one is. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Your loving heart shines illuminate your words, Wish you all the best for coming year. May God Bless you dear Liz! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet Elizabeth, you are a true angel to us all and we all wish you hope and love for the New Year too! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thank you VERY much, Elizabeth. This is exactly what I was hoping for - to find love. Thank you of for such a generous wish, and of coz, I wish the same for you too. Someone as sweet as you should be loved and cherished for alwayz. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--There are so many wonderful poems in you, each one a treasure beyond belief. We are so lucky to be able to read it here...and Liz..I wish you love! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Liz, You always express love so wonderfully.I love reading your writes.This gives me a sense of peace.I know you have an angel watching over you like this. Peaches |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - If anybody deserves love, it is you. You are a fine, fine person. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Liz- Such a beautifully penned wish. I wish YOU love, my friend...and everything else that brings you happiness and smiles. Happy New Year. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Liz: This one is a keeper. We all have guardian angels - sometimes we don't listen to them but they are always there. I wish you happiness ad love too. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This was well written and well rhymed. Sometimes...I think that I have a Guardian Angel watching over me...this reminded me of that thought. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for reading and comenting, Your remarks are much appreciated I think my gaurdian angel was worn out this past year. She could use a rest Liz |
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