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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2001-12-25 06:29 PM


Once lost and seemingly forgotten
I have found my home
'Tis with you, in your arms,
where I truly belong
For two long years we talked
through empty words upon a screen
But the moment you touched me
you became everything to me
No part of me questions
any of these things that I feel
All it takes is a thought of you
to prove that love is real
The beating of your heart
as we lie awake at night
Gives me reassurance
that you're the love of my life
A million words could never tell you
how I feel when we kiss
There simply are no words
to describe feelings such as this
So many things I want to tell you
and I know there's plenty of time
Forever started on a Saturday
that's when I knew you were mine
You and I are living proof
that dreams do come true
No poem could ever truly say
Just how much I love you
So, I'll say it when we touch
and with every tender kiss
May we find warmth and love
and start each day like this



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SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-25 06:44 PM


Jeffrey, in love looks real good on you *sigh* beautifully done, and hey! glad to see you posting again  

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2 posted 2001-12-25 07:02 PM


Jeffrey, now, this is what I like to read.....happy holidays to you dear one.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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3 posted 2001-12-25 07:37 PM


What a wonderful feeling it must be, to hold the one you love so closely. May all your dreams come true. It sounds like you will have a great New Year to celebrate your Love.
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4 posted 2001-12-25 11:30 PM


May you cherish your love and have all your dreams come true. Happy Holiday


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5 posted 2001-12-26 01:32 AM


You look good in love.May you continue on your wonderful path.
Peaches

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6 posted 2001-12-26 10:18 PM


Beautifully written, my friend.  Nice to see you back again.  May your love's light shine eternally.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-12-26 11:53 PM


And that is the perfect way to show it. Absolutely filled with the tender love you feel for her. I love it!!! Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-12-27 12:39 PM


:heat:

(sigh) Oh Jeffrey, you are sooooooo romantic, this is bound to melt her heart forever! (sigh) May you forever touch your heart with your gorgeous words, just as she will do to you! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-12-27 01:11 PM


This is so romantic Jeffery!  I love it!  I too know what it is like to find a loving place, in one's heart and vice versa.  Nicely stated, I loved!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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