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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How sharp the knife will slice a soul? Can I speak my heart- beat spoken? Tell me now, lest I grow cold. Come here, still my shaken mind. Come here, you were meant for me. Come to me and know you're mine. and come again, come to believe, this dance of soul, a tale of olde, simple faith of love's reprieve.. Come unto me, gaze in belief, allow release-- serenity, give it--give it all to me... release my secrets--told. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) May your love forever share with you comfort and pure love and release all his love to you! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your heart beats with loves magic! (kiss on cheek) Weall love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh..... I love no, I LOVE this!!! keeper!  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Great write Karen. I can always feel so much emotion in your poetry. You have a way with expressing your thoughts on paper as few others can. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great job Karen! This was filled with emotion. T'was very deep, I loved it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
That you got your screen name into this quite emotional poem was befitting, indeed. "Can I cut me open? How sharp the knife will slice a soul?" I wonder too...just how sharp? I enjoyed this. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
There is magic in your words but a feeling of such sadness too. Your poems are always so emotionally powerful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I wrote something much in the same emotional vein as this, not nearly as powerful, or emotive, yeserday, posted it and then deleted it, instead posting something I felt was more uplifting. This is powerful. I wonder why I can't post something that speaks of raw courage and vibraint emotion as this does, as you did. I guess in some ways, I feel intimidated in writing still, and I'm working on that. Thank you for this, it went deep. iambic- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, You have opened the doors to inbetween. Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Come to me and know you're mine. and come again, come to believe, this dance of soul, a tale of olde, simple faith of love's reprieve.. Come unto me, gaze in belief, allow release-- serenity, give it--give it all to me... release my secrets--told. =========================== finally ... I was thinkin I was gonna have to walk there on me lips to read your rhymes  me feels better now...gotta have me dose of serenity..tis like raspberry tea. will write soon...love ya ka  meYou're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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