Open Poetry #17 |
God, May I See You? |
wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
God, May I See You? "God, may I see you?" A silence fills the air Into the dark I stare with hopeful gaze ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" The room is cold and dark And blank I stare into a blurring haze ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" A cold wind passes by As long I vainly peer into the night ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" The desert stretches wide Alone I scan horizon's dismal blight ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" Soft the snowflakes drift I try to see into the flurry's fall ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" Pine needles seal the sky I look into the forest's closing wall ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" The ocean stretches broad Dimly I watch the great waves crash and roar ... ... ... "God, may I see you?" Last twilight closes near..... I hope to see him on the distant shore [This message has been edited by wornways (12-25-2001 08:03 AM).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was a lovely reminder to watch for Him Wornways. I think this Christmas especially, we all hope to see him in our hearts. Merry Christmas to you and yours! Best wishes for a wonderful holiday, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned, love it. Merry Christmas Charisma |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
if you keep looking you will find him. Beautiful poem.. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
wornways- This is a beautifully penned piece. And, yes...may we all see Him in our hearts, now and forever. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we always continue to believe in him, and follow His love, and knoiw deep down His love is in all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
He is everywhere isn't he?? Very nice piece!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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