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0 posted 2001-11-17 07:49 AM


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                       t a      a
                     n            j
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                                                            forth rippling w
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               s o        blue

~*~

Repost from Open #9


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2001-11-17 08:43 AM


oh gosh!!   this is super creative!!   Looking forward to seeing your other works.  
Nan
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2 posted 2001-11-17 08:52 AM


'Tis an awe-inspiring force of nature, isn't it?... This is a wonderfully creative representation of the force of Mother Nature...  
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3 posted 2001-12-04 01:34 AM


Oh I love this....it's soo fun as are waterfalls.  They have the same beauty as do rainbows, mountains, and rushing rivers.  I love all of the above.  I loved the creativity Sunshine!!!!

Bridgette  

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4 posted 2001-12-04 01:58 AM


Boy, Sunny, how long did this take you to do?     My, aren't we dedicated?

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5 posted 2001-12-04 02:30 AM


Karilea~
NEATO~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-12-04 02:54 AM




regards,
sudhir

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7 posted 2001-12-04 07:29 AM


well, well, well - arent't you the creative sprite?!  This was a really neat presentation, Karilea.  S-a-y-y-y-y, do you think you could help me craft a poem that looks like a boot with kitty whiskers on it?  heh heh
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8 posted 2001-12-04 08:16 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhh my gosh, this is soooooooo lovely! (sigh) I love this style, the expression of your pen shines in this poem! Smoothly your lips create cascading waterfalls! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-12-04 10:38 AM


Wow, Sunshine! You are so creative.
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