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Open Poetry #17

Its yours to take

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-17 06:44 AM

Close your eyes
and take a deap breath.

Breath in from you nose,
and out from your mouth.

The trick is to do it slowly.

Then open your eyes,
and see the world around you
as if it was the first time
you had ever laid eyes up on it.

And remember this.

You can make it whatever you want it to be,
just have faith in yourself.
Take what you want from it as it is big enough
to give it to you.

Experience life the way you want to, not
how others expect you to,
for realy this life belongs to you alone.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-17 07:07 AM

The last three lines
say it all.
Well done!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-17 08:37 AM

It's great to see you Fee! What a wonderfully inspirational verse to lift the heart. Thank you for this beautiful and positive reminder this morning. What a great read to start my day. Into my library this goes for the days I need some inspiration! Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-11-17 08:44 AM

What a great advice...!!

Such inspirational write..

Thank you
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