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Care To Dance (a duet with Kethry)
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Care To Dance (a duet with Kethry) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“CARE TO DANCE” a duet by Bill Charles & Kethry ~~~~ Tonight we’ll hold each other close, my hand I give you, and we’ll dance… Perhaps embracing, in the twilight, I would with you, take this chance… Kind Sir! My heart flutters so I never thought that you would ask The twilight placing for our romance glows, and I will in your touch bask Music would play, guitars so soft, rhythm to feel, as hips move and sway… Your touch to me, knowing warmth… the same as, a delicate bouquet… I nestle close to feel your heart beating close against my breast Exuding warmth from my inner core I take this dance as first and best Your aroma magic, my senses acute, perfume telling, a heart would melt… Hair of silk, my fingers to caress, lips of sweetness, to be felt… Your scent is strong; my nostrils flair sights, sounds and senses fill my brain I’m overwhelmed and can you tell as I dance in mellow refrain So my hand I give, if you care to dance, pleasures you would know, into the night… For my touch is tender, only for you, sensuous we will be, in the moonlight… And when the dance is over, done please take me home my darling one To share our pleasure through all the night to dance again, and greet morning sun ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-23-2001 07:13 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Bill and Kethry...and the band does play on in this sensuous song... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Your aroma magic, my senses acute, perfume telling, a heart would melt… Hair of silk, my fingers to caress, lips of sweetness, to be felt…" ...beautiful....and the ending, perfect!! beautiful and romantic!! well done you two!!!  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I love to hear guitars playing. Thank you for sharing your dance with me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill and Kethry, this is soooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) Such a romantic and sensual dance of true love, sweet friend, may true loves joy forever fill both your hearts always! (BIG GROUP HUG) We all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kethry and Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kethry and Bill! A beautiful duet! Much enjoyed the dance this evening. Bravo! *Holiday Hugs, Nancy* *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Really super Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a marvelous collaboration Bill and Kethry! You've captured a lovely moment in time and expressed it beautifully. Very much enjoyed! Best wishes to you both, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul and Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly fabulous. This is sooooooo sensuous. You know I LOVE THIS. When you duet YOU TWO really DUET I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. A duet sung to utter perfection    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*sigh* this is so great you two! I love a romantic slow dance to a good song! Wow a lot of duets going on around here, I love it! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sweet words of verse put to a dance the night is young,with no second glance! nicely said |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sensually perfect.....such a dance as this is truly one for lovers. Absolutely wonderful. Merry Christmas to you both. I love this duet that you have written. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning!! I wish I could dance like this!! Good job, you two! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kethry & Bill, Fabulous poem! I'd like to know the music to which you dance. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, first and foremost thank you for writing this with me, your leading lines inspired magic in me this night...I would dance with you anytime... a waltz, a tango, a quick-step, cheek to cheek, or pas de deux...just ask I'll always dance with you. Magnus, the band does play on...I think it was a rubber band.  SEA, you old romantic you. inot2B, thanks for the compliment, I didn't hear guitars...I heard violins. Noah, For the group hug I thank you...although I can't speak for Bill I'm sure he too would be secretly pleased. Enchantress, I was inspired by the lovely writes you have posted recently. Titia and Kit, praise from the best...Wow and thank you. Marsha,  RosePetals, there are a lot of duets...it's practice for Valentine's Day ecrivan, sometimes romance or just the dance a second glance gave me a chance. Startime, thanks I enjoyed dancing with Bill. amusmi, you know what they say...practice makes perfect. Thanks Larry, We danced to the music of our matched heartbeat...anyone or two can do it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - thank you for this dance. I would also, dance to this rhythm any time with you. Your words are romantic, and with a sensual touch. Thanks for writing with me... BC |
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