Open Poetry #17 |
Verses to tell - duet by Titia & Bill Charles |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
“VERSES TO TELL” a duet by Titia & Bill Charles ~~~~ When souls connect in duet verses Words of different worlds emerge We don't know each other truly So we're reaching out in search A duet I asked, to write with you Thousands of miles, we are apart Never meeting, or saying hello I know we’ll do this, from the heart I could write of love and tenderness And you would answer me as such I could write of grieve and sadness But that wouldn't satisfy us much Tenderness and love, my forte And I would answer, for it’s within Sadness and grief, also I know Many places, have I been Shall we write about the friendship Found at Passion's for times long About respect and loving care ness That is given when things go wrong Perhaps to write, a friend to be Many there are, at this site Where many are warm, and sincere No matter what we say, it’s alright I do thank you for the opportunity For connecting our souls my friend We did search and find each other In this duet, and to me, a lot it meant Your thanks I accept, mine in return For a friend indeed, have I found Over many miles, you are there And I know, that I’ll stay around A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill and Titia... I believe you both have bridged the gap of thousands of miles in establishing a warmth of friendship between two individuals as well as the friendship of this place we call Passions... Thanx much to both of you for giving us all this treat...from your hearts.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet Bill and Titia, I'm so happy you have become close friends, just as we all here at Passions are embraced in the spirit of friendship! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful declaration of friendship, sweet friend, we all love you both so much! God Bless You! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Titia and Bill~What a lovely duet about a friendship over many miles. The Internet sure has made the world a much smaller place. This is a beautiful write. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderful duet Titia and Bill! I loved the concept of "writing about writing together" ... so unique and creative, very nicely done indeed! Best wishes to you both, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a fresh approach to a poem! You both did an excellent job! Big congrats! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow~you sure enough did a wonderful job on this one you two! Titia your big heart could bridge across any ocean sweet lady. Bill, nice to know you are my neighbour now, and I bet you are loving the island? This was just great to write together about doing just that! ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
I really liked this one. Great job. ^_^ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is lovely Bill and Titia, so much truth in those words. What a wonderful world we live in, where people around the world can get to know each other in friendship, as though they are neighbours. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely wonderful. I love it..It truly shows how hearts connect across the distant miles. You two have done a magnificent job of this duet. I love it....BRAVO!!! **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill and Titia, what a lovely way to express smiles across the miles. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - wanted to thank you so much for this write that we have done together. And a friend I have found across many miles. Merry Christmas to you and yours.... BC |
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