Open Poetry #17 |
Where Can I Be? |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Somewhere In my heart I believe that I will find love Love that I can have Where can I be? In all I can be Is In your heart, Loving you, so true , so deeply, Where can I be? I can In your heart That Is all I need Where can I be?I know, Deep In my heart, Where can I be? Can I be In your heart? I wonder sometimes The reason why, Seasons changes Wheremy heart can be? my heart can be yours, Where can I be? I can be In your heart, I can only be yours In your heart, Where I can be? Where can I be? [This message has been edited by vandana (12-23-2001 05:45 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
where can you be? wherever you are. . . wonderfully done my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well I believe love is looking for you also...so you have a good chance...keep believing...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm sure where ever you are, love is close..... |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
I feel such hope and conviction in your words. It was very moving. Roger |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hope you can be wherever you desire... This poem expresses that need...You certainly deserve that pleasure.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, I hope you find all the love your golden heart deserves and desires! (kiss on cheek) Love is where you belong, sweet friend, may love fill your heart ever after! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like the use of questions too in my poems but tend to limit the amount, you message is nice though |
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