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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Alone, we greet the golden beams, Like frozen statues staring skyward, As if the sun can read our dreams That we, ourselves cannot decipher. As if the Fates have spun a net To catch our thoughts midway in flight But caught the fading stars instead And carried off the solemn night. Alone, uncomfortable together, We sit in silence, holding hands. And both of us are wondering whether We’re slaves to destiny or chance. Check out my poetry here: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"As if the sun can read our dreams That we, ourselves cannot decipher." oh I like that part......  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
We’re slaves to destiny or chance." That I wonder very often. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, sometimes we can feel uncomfortable in arms of love, but we are all born in destiny, and in believing in your heart, you will find the most beautiful love that will bring joy to your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
stylewise I like it and I too write on the theme of fate and destiny at times! Happy holidays |
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