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Son Netier
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since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

0 posted 2001-12-23 07:47 AM

O, how I wish for more of you with me,
Lace dress for night to hide your sweet delight,
O, how I long this time always to be,
Caress so soft and you still sleep the night,
O, Sun the creeps into our room with beams,
Slowly it grows to the brightness of day,
O, show her real and as lovely as dreams,
Waking not now for she’s going to stay,
No place to rush to be except with me,
Sleeping she moves brushes her hair from face
O, sweet sleeper my dream’s reality
I could spend the day in this time and place,
She Rolls over away from the daybreak,
I’d Watch forever if she’d never wake.

Bill

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-12-23 08:03 AM

Bill,
I think this happens every Sunday? Enjoyed.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-12-23 08:05 AM

What a beautiful and tender moment you have captured here Bill, truly lovely ... very much enjoyed the flow of your words.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-12-23 10:06 AM

Ah... Sleeping in... What a plan..

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

4 posted 2001-12-23 10:22 AM

Very passionate, gentle, stylish write sir, I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-23 12:00 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! What a beautiful feeling it is to wake and find true love beside you and sharing each new day with. (big hugggsssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish I could write sonnets like you, these are all so beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2001-12-23 12:04 PM

Bill, this was so lovely, strbux

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-12-23 12:33 PM

As delicate as winter sunlight through lace...

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-12-23 06:08 PM

*sigh*. . . well, now you've gone and done it. . . all mornings should be like this. . .

well done. . . a good use of the form. . .

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-12-23 07:09 PM

nicely done, Bill.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

10 posted 2001-12-23 07:29 PM

this is the best of sleeping in,no? enjoy it.
nicely said

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-12-23 07:46 PM

Ah Bill....this one is a beauty and much reminded me of one of my favourites by Keats.

"And still she slept an azure-lidded sleep
In blanched linen, smooth, and lavender'd."

*Happy Holidays, Nancy*

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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