Open Poetry #17 |
At Night In My Dreams |
John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
"At Night In My Dreams" I hung up my riggin', I laid it all down. I've spent my last entries on fruitless go 'rounds. I'm nearly fifty, and too old it seems- But I'm still a champion at night in my dreams. At night in my dreams, I'm still ridin' them high! My spurs on my boots, hooking holes in the sky. I thrill to the lights, and the dirt, and the screams... And I'm still a champion at night in my dreams. For twenty-two years I went "down the road"- I rode some good horses, sometimes I got throwed... My wife finally gave up on all of my schemes, But I'm still the champion, at night in my dreams. At night in my dreams, I am rolling in dough- A champ on a roll in the Pro Rodeo... On top in the standings with all of the cream- Yes, I'm still a champion, at night in my dreams. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I was smiling all the way through this. Where oh where would we be without our dreams? I might not be the champion but I can be the queen.... (in my dreams) nice! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I can't help but see you as a champion forever as you weave words that rate the highest in my mind. Ride them high in your dreams, my friend, ride them high. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YES!! So glad I didn't miss this gem! Great writing here John! Enjoyed much.... hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It can't be over at 50, can it??? I sure hope not, John... Nice write, m'friend... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
We all need to feel like a champion at times. Even if it's only at night in our dreams. Nice write, John. All writing comes |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression and well written, of course! |
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