Open Poetry #17 |
My Favorite Christmas Present |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Some Christmas presents will last into a lifetime of memories. My favorite Christmas present That you can bless me with Is to have you next to me Breathing on me Ever so tenderly As I touch your skin In the strokes of love We just lie there in our warmth And feel each other coil up together And it is not about penetrating love But the love of cuddles and touches We can talk softly about memories Or just lay back and relax Into the world of bliss Yes you are my favorite Christmas present For I get so much from you In just being next to you holding you That it blesses me into a smile within And as I feel you look into me And touch me where no one else can I know that my present Will last into my mind Remembering the wrapping being taken off As I played with what was inside it Ever so softly That we both cooed Like birds in love Flying so high That their wings melted into each other Into an embrace of survival Requiring the senses Of two becoming one emotion Yes my love I need some more wrapping So we can do this again soon D.Lester Young (12/21/01) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the blessing of a loving relationship is definately a favorite gift...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello White Eagle You certainly have something of great value and no price can be put on such a special love. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your sweet love forever be a present that lasts eternally! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful gift anyone could ever be so lucky to have! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, have the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
'I know that my present will last into my mind' To me that must surely mean love. What a sincere poem of inner beauty. Merry Christmas, Roger |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I tried that once...to give myself to her as a Christmas gift. She complained that the present was so SMALL! ain't trying that again! Your poem, unlike my comment, is touching.. ) |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Now that is totally cute. A very good reply. Thanks I needed that humor in life. As always blessings in the words that will climb mountains for you. |
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