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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-22 11:00 AM




Some Christmas presents will last into a lifetime of memories.

My favorite Christmas present
That you can bless me with
Is to have you next to me
Breathing on me
Ever so tenderly

As I touch your skin
In the strokes of love
We just lie there in our warmth
And feel each other coil up together

And it is not about penetrating love
But the love of cuddles and touches

We can talk softly about memories
Or just lay back and relax
Into the world of bliss

Yes you are my favorite Christmas present
For I get so much from you
In just being next to you holding you
That it blesses me into a smile within

And as I feel you look into me
And touch me where no one else can
I know that my present
Will last into my mind

Remembering the wrapping being taken off
As I played with what was inside it
Ever so softly
That we both cooed
Like birds in love
Flying so high
That their wings melted into each other
Into an embrace of survival
Requiring the senses
Of two becoming one emotion

Yes my love
I need some more wrapping
So we can do this again soon

D.Lester Young (12/21/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-12-22 12:37 PM


Yes the blessing of a loving relationship is definately a favorite gift...James
Suetang
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2 posted 2001-12-22 04:10 PM


Hello White Eagle
You certainly have something of great value and no price can be put on such a special love.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2001-12-22 04:15 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your sweet love forever be a present that lasts eternally! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is the most beautiful gift anyone could ever be so lucky to have! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, have the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

thepoeticplumber
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4 posted 2001-12-22 05:34 PM


'I know that my present will last into my mind'  To me that must surely mean love.  What a sincere poem of inner beauty.  Merry Christmas, Roger


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5 posted 2001-12-22 06:10 PM


I tried that once...to give myself to her as a Christmas gift. She complained that the present was so SMALL!

ain't trying that again!

Your poem, unlike my comment, is touching.. )

D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx
6 posted 2001-12-22 06:55 PM


Now that is totally cute. A very good reply. Thanks I needed that humor in life. As always blessings in the words that will climb mountains for you.
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