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Return of The Twenty or Less...#64 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#64" Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON The girl in purple across the room cross-legged eyes falling wanting "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
hehehe...good one! Sorry I don't think this one needs to be addressed in Morse Code. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo inventive and wonderful, sweet friend, you always create such beautiful abstract visions! (big hugggsssss) More, more, I love them! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now this one has so much imagery in so few words. Very nice. Makes you want to reach out to this girl in purple, lift her head up, and tell her to follow her dream. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Interesting... opens a lot of avenues to wonder what she waiting, wanting for. lol |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting..now i am wondering who is the person wanting: the girl in purple or a devoted admirer whose eyes are falling by looking at her? kewl  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nancy -- not this one, but it's still open for deciphering...  Noah: There are plenty more in store... Thank you. Kacy: Compassion can go a long way, as can empathy. John: Indeed. faterider: Congratulations for seeing beyond the reflection. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed, and what is this twenty or less, I have no idea! I must be out of the loop as usual Kathleen (Kay) |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"The girl in purple" hmmmmm..... Interesting scene..isn't it? Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hi Kay, and season's greetings to you. Thanks for stopping by. "TWENTY OR LESS..." is simply a style I introduced to PIP a few months ago where one chooses twenty or less words to express something subjectively interesting or meaningful -- there are no other limitations to this free verse style. Due to its minimalism, it is highly interpretive and a lot of fun to write (and very interesting to read the replies, too!). Give it a shot, if you're inspired! -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Melody... is it?  -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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