Open Poetry #17 |
A Little Late |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Little Late I saw colored hues of flight Just within horizons sight Bright of wings of diamonds play Flying o’er my wile that day. Shades of gold, red, green and blue Reflecting the flowers dew Collecting nectar like a bee Lifting like the waves at sea. Flew towards me in times transcend Drifting down a rainbows bend Looked upon my field of haze Touched me with her magic gaze. Out spilled rhyme like water falls Misting sprays in whispered calls. Wet me like a lover’s kiss. Left me stunned in total bliss. But fickle, is the road of fate For I was blessed, a little late |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Better late than not, dear Sy... I'm smiling here... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good Morning Sleepyhead... Glad that dream finally rhymed it was well past your posting time... I was hitting the ceiling and walls going into Sy-withdrawals! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, How did I know you were going to say that? *L* Sunshine, With the winter comming I may go into hybernation. LOL *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Flew towards me in times transcend Drifting down a rainbows bend Looked upon my field of haze Touched me with her magic gaze. Out spilled rhyme like water falls Misting sprays in whispered calls. Wet me like a lover’s kiss. Left me stunned in total bliss. could that verse be any cooler But fickle, is the road of fate For I was blessed, a little late ====================================== Me thinks you've always been "blessed" .... exceptional poets like you are born with the gift ... and when you share your gift ... tis us who are then blessed. And I, for one, am very grateful for such giftings and blessings. Your waterfalls of rhyme are the secret ingrediant in me raspberry tea *winkiewinkie* me sweet Stinky *L* me You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Do you know, I've come to treasure raspbery tea. It intoxicates me. Gives me visions of butterflies. That hover me like colored shies. WW R S |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
To have known the bliss To have known the kiss Is all that matters is a verse such as this LOve, Liz |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah ... me thinks you could never be too late with words as sweet as this Sy, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Thoughts should never be rushed, and this beautiful piece shines with your lovely talent! (big hugggssssss) I love it! It is never too late to express true beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! Have the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Just such a beautiful poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Yes that is very true, Love Sy Kit, A lovely from a lovely lady, thank you *L* Noal, And a happy holiday to you. Titia, A beautiful from a beautiful lady, thank you. *L* |
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