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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-12-22 08:10 AM


A Little Late

I saw colored hues of flight
Just within horizons sight
Bright of wings of diamonds play
Flying o’er my wile that day.

Shades of gold, red, green and blue
Reflecting the flowers dew
Collecting nectar like a bee
Lifting like the waves at sea.

Flew towards me in times transcend
Drifting down a rainbows bend
Looked upon my field of haze
Touched me with her magic gaze.

Out spilled rhyme like water falls
Misting sprays in whispered calls.
Wet me like a lover’s kiss.
Left me stunned in total bliss.

But fickle, is the road of fate
For I was blessed, a little late


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Nan
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1 posted 2001-12-22 08:13 AM


Better late than not, dear Sy... I'm smiling here...
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-22 08:17 AM



Good Morning Sleepyhead...

Glad that dream finally rhymed
it was well past your posting time...
I was hitting the ceiling and walls
going into Sy-withdrawals!

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-12-22 08:58 AM


Nan,
How did I know you were going to say that? *L*

Sunshine,
With the winter comming I may go into hybernation. LOL *L*

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-12-22 09:13 AM


Flew towards me in times transcend
Drifting down a rainbows bend

Looked upon my field of haze
Touched me with her magic gaze.

Out spilled rhyme like water falls
Misting sprays in whispered calls.
Wet me like a lover’s kiss.
Left me stunned in total bliss.


could that verse be any cooler

But fickle, is the road of fate
For I was blessed, a little late
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Me thinks you've always been "blessed" ....
exceptional poets like you are born with the gift ... and when you share your gift ... tis us who are then blessed. And I, for one, am very grateful for such giftings and blessings.
Your waterfalls of rhyme are the secret ingrediant in me raspberry tea

*winkiewinkie* me sweet Stinky  *L*
me

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-12-22 09:22 AM


JM,
Do you know,
I've come to treasure raspbery tea.
It intoxicates me.
Gives me visions of butterflies.
That hover me like colored shies.
WW R S

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2001-12-22 09:36 AM


To have known the bliss
To have known the kiss
Is all that matters
is a verse such as this
LOve,
Liz

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-12-22 09:38 AM


Ah ... me thinks you could never be too late with words as sweet as this Sy, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2001-12-22 03:41 PM




(smiles) Thoughts should never be rushed, and this beautiful piece shines with your lovely talent! (big hugggssssss) I love it! It is never too late to express true beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! Have the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-12-22 06:06 PM


Just such a beautiful poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-12-22 07:15 PM


Elizabeth,
Yes that is very true, Love Sy

Kit,
A lovely from a lovely lady, thank you *L*

Noal,
And a happy holiday to you.

Titia,
A beautiful from a beautiful lady, thank you.
*L*

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