Open Poetry #17 |
Let Me In |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let Me In I know you're hurting inside. Unsure of yourself. Untrusting of me. But I was hoping with all of my heart that nothing in this world could keep us apart and someday you will find the place in your heart to let me in. Will you Jin? JamesLee December22 2001 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
How could she NOT help but let you in, James, after reading your heart with her eyes!! Wonderful thoughts here......Happy Christmas!! ~~ appreciate what you have ~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sunnyone...she has to find that place in her heart...if it is in fact in there...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh James, with such a beautiful heart like yours, who wouldn't want to let you in? (big hugggssssss) I pray with all my heart you and Jin will share a lifetime of happiness together! (smiles) Sooooo wonderfully written, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
James, I pray that she comes to her senses and lets you in. You are a very nice, caring, likeable guy. Happy holidays RP |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
JamesMichael Such a sad but very beautiful request and I hope it has been granted. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How could such words from a man's heart ever be turned from? Nicely done JM |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, How could she turn down such an honest plea? Tender and heartfelt.. like all of your writings. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Sherri New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 5 |
great poem i totally understand the feeling yr having, i can feel it when i read your poem |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I sure hope she will let you in, sweet man. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm thinking the list is gonna get pretty long, of those ladies that would let you in if she won't.....(((hugs))) I hope for you she does....have a Merry Christmas James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a simple enough request. . . or is it??? well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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