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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-12-22 02:10 AM


Let Me In

I know you're
hurting inside.
Unsure of yourself.
Untrusting of me.
But I was hoping
with all of my heart
that nothing in this world
could keep us apart
and someday you will
find the place
in your heart
to let me in.
Will you Jin?

JamesLee
December22
2001


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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-12-22 05:51 AM


How could she NOT help but let you in, James, after reading your heart with her eyes!!  Wonderful thoughts here......Happy Christmas!!

~~ appreciate what you have ~~
  
    


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-12-22 12:28 PM


Thank you Sunnyone...she has to find that place in her heart...if it is in fact in there...James
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3 posted 2001-12-22 03:06 PM




(sigh) Oh James, with such a beautiful heart like yours, who wouldn't want to let you in? (big hugggssssss) I pray with all my heart you and Jin will share a lifetime of happiness together! (smiles) Sooooo wonderfully written, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-22 03:14 PM


James,

I pray that she comes to her senses and lets you in. You are a very nice, caring, likeable guy. Happy holidays

RP

Suetang
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5 posted 2001-12-22 04:04 PM


JamesMichael
Such a sad but very beautiful request and I hope it has been granted.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2001-12-22 04:27 PM


How could such words from a man's heart ever
be turned from?  Nicely done JM

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7 posted 2001-12-22 05:07 PM


James,
  
     How could she turn down such an honest plea?  Tender and heartfelt.. like all of your writings.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Sherri
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8 posted 2001-12-22 05:25 PM


great poem i totally understand the feeling yr having, i can feel it when i read your poem
Startime
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9 posted 2001-12-22 09:11 PM


*sigh* I sure hope she will let you in, sweet man. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2001-12-22 09:22 PM


I'm thinking the list is gonna get pretty long, of those ladies that would let you in if she won't.....(((hugs))) I hope for you she does....have a Merry Christmas James
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11 posted 2001-12-22 09:23 PM


a simple enough request. . . or is it???

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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