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Open Poetry #17

I've Used Words Before

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2001-12-22 09:02 PM

I've used words before,
To describe a feeling once,
Everybody must have felt,
But the words are just the same,
And only the feeling is different,

I used to know my heart,
And where it was leading to,
I used to know who to love,
But my hearts not the same,
And only the feeling is different,

I used to look back at memories,
And recall back to them again,
But the memories in my mind,
Never do seem to fade away,
And only the feeling is different,

I've used words before,
To describe a feeling once,
Everybody must have felt,
But the words are just the same,
And only the feeling is different.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

[This message has been edited by Moon Dust (12-22-2001 09:04 PM).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-12-22 09:04 PM

yes. . . the feelings are different. . . I've always wondered why that is. . .

well done. . .

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-22 09:06 PM

oh yes, yes, this is so great! I like this one.....

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2001-12-22 09:11 PM

Sven - Thank u I cant work it out either

Sea - Thanks 4 reading

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

4 posted 2001-12-22 09:13 PM

Great poem. How word feelings can so change in a lifetime. They can actually change from day to day. Thank You. Roger

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-12-22 09:25 PM

thepoeticplumber - Yeah it seems that every feeling of love is unqiue and we all seem to have different version of it.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

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