Open Poetry #17 |
To End War......a sonnet |
Balladeer
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I'd like to say to Christians near and far I'd like to say to Jews and Muslims, too It’s time for all to seek an end to war. And recognize your different points of view. To Catholics and Protestants I say To all of those who murder in His name It’s time to wash the seeds of hate away. Your legacy is nothing more than shame. To Maoists, Hindus, Shintos and the Tao’s How many of the innocents must die? The time to stop hostilities is now. War is an act no man can justify. To all who claim theirs is a god of peace It’s time for this insanity to cease. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A perfect sonnet With a perfect point From a perfect poet Excellent! Liz |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
AMEN! enough is enough. Only God knows when and if there will be world peace, but I hope it is sometime soon because too many innocent people are dying from all the rage. ((hugs)) RP |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Michael.... ohmeohmy.. *sigh*..... well you KNOW how I will feel about this! ... first, a perfect sonnet, a perfect gift..... perfect poetry etched in my soul...... this Peace is what i wish the world and you have penned it like no other could.... thank you for all you give, sweet Poet! Love to you this Christmas and hopes for a beautiful New Year filled with dreams come true...... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer dear heart I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Yes I know I always say that but then you always write to utter perfection. I wouldn’t have to say it was absolutely perfect if you didn’t always write so well would I? No exactly As for the words you've written here, I can only say Truly this is Utterly Utterly the best, this is truly fabulous, I know you are a master of your art but this is outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. I'm struck dumb with utter awe, you certainly know how to deliver a Christmas message 'Deer. Truly fabulous writing As always Mushy And all I can offer is Amen To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hehe... i'm smiling and giggling because Liz wrote "perfect" in her reply and so did i but i was typing mine when she posted hers and didn't see what she wrote until now which tells me this.... Perfection is something we all can see... perfectly! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, may all your Christmas wishes come true, for this is a wish that only a man who has been there, done that, could make... Thank you for this...and Merry Christmas to you... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-21-2001 07:57 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer, A lovely message of peace. Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone would open their eyes are realize peace is the better path to choose? May you have a happy and safe holiday Hugs, Tara |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Amen to this, Balladeer! I second this. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
"deer", I like the way you think( scary ain't it? ) unfortunately , the rest of the world isn't quite so logical. Nice sonnet, nice thoughts, nice try. The world needs more poets. Doc P.S. A very merry to you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maybe you should send this to all the "heads" of state.. If only they would listen Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Balladeer.....if only...... *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* if only this poem could be sent around the world to all those who control this world like the chess pieces on a board. Even then they wouldn't get the message...too much power and control involved. **hugs** I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) So sad but well-written, dearest friend, I too wish for all the world to embrace together with arms wide open and make harmony to the world. (wipes tears) We may be dreamers, but we are not the only ones, and if only we can all dream together, this dream can come true to all with just the littlest bit of hope! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this powerful poem tugged at my heartstrings with its powerful message! We all love you so much, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You write one heck of a sonnet, and it goes right to the heart of things....I loved this too....maybe you'll teach me about doing these sonnets right?? |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Ahhh yes, these thoughts and wishes have been uttered many times by many people. Let's hope that someday we'll all get your wish. Joe Lamando |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Someday they may hear till then 'Perfect' Balladeer. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Salute!!! A perfect poem for a perfect Christmas wish. Thanks. Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Well you got my Amen, Mr perfect. Happy holiday. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So very true, and so perfectly stated Michael ... amen, my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very nice piece here that has a point. We all need to communicate in the belief of a total humanity that can bless each others thoughts in peace. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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There can't be any greater affront to God than murder is His name. Very well expressed, Michael. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If a poet were president, this surely would be the platform! Perfect thoughts for this time of year sir. |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thanks to you all! Yes, this is something we can all agree on for sure. Why can't politicians see as clearly as poets? We may never see it in our lifetimes but it will happen...some day. Bless you all! SEA....any time. Say the word.. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I love to read sonnets, never wrote one myself though, must try it sometime. Your words are so true, I'd like to think: Let mothers and poets rule the world and a better place it would be. But then: Maybe Not, I don't know. HUGS, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer, the word is now or maybe hurry LOL after Christmas,I'll email you for some help thank you! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
mounted and ready, SEA! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wait!!!!! i wanna learn too..... !!!!!! can you help me? |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
maybe you should just come to California LOL I really will be "bugging" you LOL thank you!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
me? oh great!! we can all meet in California and learn sonnets from Michael?? coooooll!!!!!! i'm coming!!!! thanks |
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