Open Poetry #17 |
I Have Searched |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I Have Searched I have searched for love in corners of the earth where love is found I have searched for truth that still exists and honor that abounds I have searched for beauty in the sky and in a gardens wall I was searching for my spirit in a church, and found them all Elizabeth Santos |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey wow! I REALLY like this a LOT, Elizabeth... this is just fantastic poetry! One of the best that I've read all day, hands down. It's very simple, and that's a great aspect of it. The flow is what really got me, your flow is absolutely flawless! And the creative way that you say the last part, I was not prepared for. Excellent, excellent writing. It's won a seat in my personal library. ~Allan |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
time to hit the button... I always forget to hit the button. Goes to show what an honour it is to get in put in my library. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Love is everywhere in the simplest things, and in your own loving heart! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love fills all your beautiful words, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Elizabeth, this is wonderful ...Merry Christmas again Kathleen (Kay) |
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