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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-12-21 05:12 PM



I Have Searched

I have searched for love in corners
of the earth where love is found
I have searched for truth that still exists
and honor that abounds
I have searched for beauty in the sky
and in a gardens wall
I was searching for my spirit in a church,
and found them all


Elizabeth Santos

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-12-21 05:16 PM


Hey wow!  I REALLY like this a LOT, Elizabeth... this is just fantastic poetry!  One of the best that I've read all day, hands down.

It's very simple, and that's a great aspect of it.  The flow is what really got me, your flow is absolutely flawless!  And the creative way that you say the last part, I was not prepared for.  

Excellent, excellent writing.  It's won a seat in my personal library.  

~Allan


Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-12-21 05:17 PM


time to hit the button... I always forget to hit the button.

Goes to show what an honour it is to get in put in my library.   LOL

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3 posted 2001-12-21 05:17 PM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Love is everywhere in the simplest things, and in your own loving heart! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love fills all your beautiful words, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-21 10:55 PM


Elizabeth, this is wonderful ...Merry Christmas again

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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