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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-12-21 01:23 PM




Don't bring me roses,
don't bring me wine,
if you want to win
this heart of mine.

Don't give me a star
taken from the sky,
if you want to see
joy in my eyes.

Don't promise the world
on a silver platter,
you see, material things
just do not matter.


If you want to win
this heart of mine,
don't bring me roses
don't bring me wine....

just love me......



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-21-2001 01:24 PM).]

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BloomingRose
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1 posted 2001-12-21 01:48 PM


Best gift of all...the gift of love.
I really enjoyed reading this.

Deb

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2 posted 2001-12-21 04:32 PM




(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the beauty of true love fills your heart! (sigh) Love is the most beautiful present one could ever ask for! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-21 04:39 PM


GentleSpirit~

'just love me......'

Me too girl~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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strbbux
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4 posted 2001-12-21 04:46 PM


Wonderfully romantic, strbbux
Bill Charles
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5 posted 2001-12-21 08:58 PM


Gentle Spirit - but I love giving roses to that someone special, red is love from what I am told...

BC

Sherri
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6 posted 2001-12-21 10:51 PM


I think this poem is very sweet and alao well writen! Great job on it!!

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-12-21 10:56 PM


Donna, it just doesn't get any better than that does it?  hugs dear lady

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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8 posted 2001-12-21 10:57 PM


Oh yes, I agree one hundred percent! I know a lot of people out there love to get material things but that is not what loving someone is all about. I love this!!
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