Open Poetry #17 |
Don't Bring Me Roses (Revised) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Don't bring me roses, don't bring me wine, if you want to win this heart of mine. Don't give me a star taken from the sky, if you want to see joy in my eyes. Don't promise the world on a silver platter, you see, material things just do not matter. If you want to win this heart of mine, don't bring me roses don't bring me wine.... just love me...... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-21-2001 01:24 PM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Best gift of all...the gift of love. I really enjoyed reading this. Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the beauty of true love fills your heart! (sigh) Love is the most beautiful present one could ever ask for! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ 'just love me......' Me too girl~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wonderfully romantic, strbbux |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - but I love giving roses to that someone special, red is love from what I am told... BC |
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Sherri New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 5 |
I think this poem is very sweet and alao well writen! Great job on it!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Donna, it just doesn't get any better than that does it? hugs dear lady Kathleen (Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes, I agree one hundred percent! I know a lot of people out there love to get material things but that is not what loving someone is all about. I love this!! |
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