Open Poetry #17 |
I Would If I Could |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I Would If I Could I would if I could touch your eyes with soft lips kissing them closed I would if I could touch your lips with finger tips tracing them gently I would if I could touch your heart with softness given from my heart I would if I could touch your soul with sweetness from spirit freely I would if I could touch you now with passion heat wrapped flowing Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Oh ... what a lovely, lovely write~ Delicately seductive~ I'm liking it VERY, VERY much~ You write the heart soooooo well, sweet poetess~ Happy Holidays to you, sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice star, very intimate and sweet, strbbux |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - would if I could too... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Karen...a lot of woulds and a few coulds.. If I could get my chores done...I would be writing poetry right now... If I could get the bills paid....I would take a long break... I wish my would/could list was like yours.. Yours sounds like it is a lot more fun and romantic... Enjoyed this... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, they eyes and lips are a little tough but you have no problem touching the heart and soul with your beautiful words, lady |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You said it,and I would do the same. Beautiful.. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge....**big hugs** from such a talent as you that is the greatest compliment. Thank you, so much, dear one. strbbux...Thank you, I am so glad you could feel so much from this poem. **hugs** Bill...*sigh* yes....we understand and share these words and feelings. **big hugs** Magnus....I am glad, my friend, that you liked it.....*grin* I am trying to stay away from the oysters but mmmmmmm they are sooooo good. **hugs** Balladeer.....thank you so much, sweet man. **big hugs** Sandra...*grin* now all we have to do is find us a man that we can say these things too. Keep looking, girl, he will come out of the blue to capture your heart. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Karen....an absolutely beautiful poem both in words and in form. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All that lovin' and no kisses on the lips? James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, Karen, Kathleen (Kay) |
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