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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-12-21 08:04 PM

I Would If I Could

I would if I could
touch your eyes
with soft lips
kissing them
closed

I would if I could
touch your lips
with finger tips
tracing them
gently

I would if I could
touch your heart
with softness
given from
my heart

I would if I could
touch your soul
with sweetness
from spirit
freely

I would if I could
touch you now
with passion
heat wrapped
flowing

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-12-21 08:12 PM

StarTime~
Oh ... what a lovely, lovely write~
Delicately seductive~
I'm liking it VERY, VERY much~

You write the heart soooooo well, sweet poetess~
Happy Holidays to you, sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2001-12-21 08:22 PM

Very nice star, very intimate and sweet, strbbux

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-12-21 08:25 PM

Karen - would if I could too...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-12-21 08:32 PM

Wow Karen...a lot of woulds and a few coulds..

If I could get my chores done...I would
be writing poetry right now...

If I could get the bills paid....I would
take a long break...

I wish my would/could list was like yours..
Yours sounds like it is a lot more fun
and romantic...

Enjoyed this...

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-12-21 08:44 PM

Well, they eyes and lips are a little tough but you have no problem touching the heart and soul with your beautiful words, lady

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-12-21 08:49 PM

You said it,and I would do the same.
Beautiful..
Sandra

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-12-21 09:50 PM

Marge....**big hugs** from such a talent as you that is the greatest compliment. Thank you, so much, dear one.

strbbux...Thank you, I am so glad you could feel so much from this poem. **hugs**

Bill...*sigh* yes....we understand and share these words and feelings. **big hugs**

Magnus....I am glad, my friend, that you liked it.....*grin* I am trying to stay away from the oysters but mmmmmmm they are sooooo good. **hugs**

Balladeer.....thank you so much, sweet man. **big hugs**

Sandra...*grin* now all we have to do is find us a man that we can say these things too. Keep looking, girl, he will come out of the blue to capture your heart. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2001-12-21 10:26 PM

Karen....an absolutely beautiful poem both in words and in form.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-12-21 10:49 PM

All that lovin' and no kisses on the lips? James

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-12-21 10:53 PM

This is lovely, Karen,

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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